I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Oh I just wanted to say thank you for reading my piece Adam and Eva. I just wanted to let you know that was only the beginning by the way there is more to it. I only put that much up to get a feel for what others thought of it as a start. I'm glad you liked it. Oh and I'm thinking I will use your advice in the future it could come in handy. Anyways, thanks.
I'm glad that it was just the beginning, it makes the piece a lot better! I'm sure that it will progress into something really great! Just ask me for another review if you want one, okay?
There are some things you can't share without ending up liking each other, and knocking out a twelve-foot mountain troll is one of them. — J.K. Rowling
