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Yours are done RazHuni!

I'll get onto the rest as soon as possible!

Edit: So is your suggestion tam_ara. You know me too well. :wink:
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Would you review this? I am planning of reviving this project and some critique form you would be quite helpful.Seems like Eternity {ch-1}

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Done shubhi!

Hope I helped. :wink:


Anyone else...? There's a dancing elephant in it for you :elephant:
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Hey could you please review this? Thankies!
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Finished yours Jas!
Sorry it dragged on... :roll:

Anyone else...?
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Can you review this? Criminal's Heart~ Ch-6

Thanks in advance!
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Viola!

Finished yours shubhi!

Anyone else...? I'm nice... :mrgreen:
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Hi Skins,

It seems like you are the perfect person to ask.

I have a poem called Nine Eleven which is dramatic poetry. Here is the link:

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I am also working on a story called For the Love of God. Here is the link:

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As you can probably tell by the title, that one is Romantic Fiction. It is only chapter 1 of my story.

If you wanted to take the time to review one or both of these, I would really appreciate it. Let me know if you want me to review something too!

Thanks,
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I've completed your reviews sare!

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Oh I just wanted to say thank you for reading my piece Adam and Eva. I just wanted to let you know that was only the beginning by the way there is more to it. I only put that much up to get a feel for what others thought of it as a start. I'm glad you liked it. Oh and I'm thinking I will use your advice in the future it could come in handy. Anyways, thanks. :)




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My pleasure babymagic :)

I'm glad that it was just the beginning, it makes the piece a lot better! I'm sure that it will progress into something really great! Just ask me for another review if you want one, okay?


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Could you please review my peice of work.




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%hanks! Just some randomness that I'd like an opinion on.
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Yours are done guys :)

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