The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

Angels-Symphony · 2009-06-30T06:37:15Z

*hammers sign up on the wall* The Angel's Gallery *walks behind the front desk and takes a seat* Hey guys! Yup, Shina's back for business ^^ *taps purple nametag* So please step inside, enjoy the free fireplace, help yourself to cookies and tea by the library, and hang your piece up on one of the walls for a review. Feel free to put as many of your pieces up on my bare walls and expect a top-notch, professional review within the next week ;) Preference: Poetry Fantasy Fiction Romantic Fiction Other Fiction Art/Photography Non-Fiction Lyrics Action/Adventure Fiction Historical Fiction Other Fiction Fan-Fiction/YWSF Dislikes: Rated R works Anything I miss will be accepted. To request a review, simply hang up a link, a title, and a genre. Thank You -Shina

Shearwater

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Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:08 am

Shearwater says... · Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:08 am

Um, hi Shina!
I was wondering if you could review this one chapter for me :3
It's called Thorns & Roses, the fifth chapter.
post637162.html#p637162
Thanks so much!

~Pink

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Angels-Symphony

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Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:44 am

Angels-Symphony says... · Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:44 am

I feel bad for being so late with these reviews

One more our and my homework will be complete. After that, it's reviewing til' midnight!

-Shina

You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.

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Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:38 am

Angels-Symphony says... · Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:38 am

Evi- complete

Onyx- done

Gun- Is there a way I can review your photo without the word document? I can't open those on my computer -.-"

-Shina

You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.

PenNPaper

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Sat Jan 02, 2010 8:42 am

PenNPaper says... · Sat Jan 02, 2010 8:42 am

HI Shina, wondering if you could review this piece of work for me.
It's called Saving Zanica, it's under Science Fiction and it's rated E
topic56438.html

Writing is all about imagination~

superasian

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Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:59 pm

superasian says... · Wed Jan 06, 2010 7:59 pm

hi shina!
i'd love your feedback/critcism on my WIP, Til Kingdom Come. i read your profile on inkpop and am so open for any 'harshness' you have to offer (;
post639369.html#p639369
i classify it as fantasy, but you could also call it science-fiction, i guess. it's post-apocalyptic.

xo julia

"we two alone will sing like birds in the cage… so we'll live, and pray, and sing, and tell old tales, and laugh at gilded butterflies"

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Angels-Symphony

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Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:21 am

Angels-Symphony says... · Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:21 am

Hey guys ^^ Just telling you I'll be a little slow for the next week due to exams, but I'm working on it

-Shina

You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.

*coco

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Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:09 pm

*coco says... · Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:09 pm

Hey Shina! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic. There are seven chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Take as long as you need! x

"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕

Kale

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Fri Jan 22, 2010 2:15 am

Kale says... · Fri Jan 22, 2010 2:15 am

Hey, Shina. When you have the time, could you review my Lyrics piece Fate (An Interpretation into English)?

Thanks.

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There are no chickens in Hyrule.
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sugarxsnow

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Sat Jan 23, 2010 8:02 am

sugarxsnow says... · Sat Jan 23, 2010 8:02 am

Hi Shina! I would like to have this reviewed:

Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole (Fantasy Fiction):

viewtopic.php?t=57528

Thank you very much!

"A fish bit my hand this morning, and everything became trippy. Now with this coke and this cherry, I can beautifully rule the world!"

-Dino, @ Dino and Cake's Adventures in La-La Land (Coming Soon)

PS: "Alice in Wonderland" obsessed? You bet.

BenFranks

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Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:04 pm

BenFranks says... · Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:04 pm

Hey there!
Can you do me a favour and review this:

Earth And It's Contents: The Problem With It Is. (Extract from my book.)
topic57293.html

Can you give me some thoughts on the humour of this piece? Thanks a million!
Ben.

Andie

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Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:56 pm

Andie says... · Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:56 pm

Hi, can you review my poem, I really need help developing it. Thanks so much, you're doing a great job!

Title: I met a girl today
Genre: Dramatic poetry
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72941

I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself. A small bird will drop frozen dead from a bough without ever having felt sorry for itself.
David Herbert Lawrence

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Fri Jun 23, 2023 5:57 am

DreamyAlice says... · Fri Jun 23, 2023 5:57 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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