The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

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Sorry about the delays guys. I'm only doing about 5 requests a week from my thread so I won't get carpal tunnel. I'm also trying to keep these reviews top quality. Just wanted to point that out so you all don't think I forgot you xD

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Shinaaa! Would you mind reviewing chapter two of one of my current series?

Unclaimed [2]. You'll have to read the prologue and the first chapter, but there's no need to review those if you don't want to ;)

Thanks!

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It's titled 'Meggido' and its under 'Other Fiction' though I suppose it leans towards the 'Fantasy' genre.

Take your time on reviewing it as I'm in no rush - Thanks again :).

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Octo's is done ^^
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Gal's is done.
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Hi, Shina :) It's been a while since we've talked. I miss you! How are things going? I see you've been doing a whole lot of reviewing, but how's your writing? HAve time at all? I know school makes things so much mroe complicated :(

Anyway, I just posted something new that I would love to have your opinion on. It's very rough, mind you.

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If you find time to get to it, awesome. If not, nice to talk to you anyway! Later, Shina.

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Hey i was wondering if you could review my story "Loss, part I" because it's still very rough. It is under the Romantic fiction section and is rather new, so it should be in the first two pages. Thank you so much!




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Hey, I'd like you to *pretty please* review the first two chapters of my story.

They are currently entitled Sam (#1 and #2) and they really need reviewing.

Thanks heaps. xoxo Gen.


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Grand reopening ;) You know what that means.

-Shina
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Apparently, no one wants one of my reviews :P
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For a contest, Shina, dear. ^^ It's in Other Poetry. If you have any alternative title suggestions as well, I would love to hear them. Thanks!
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Shina, if you would be so kind?

Poetry... http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic56319.html.. The dramatic type.

Thank you :)
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Of course ^^ I'll start on them this afternoon after I finish that homework -.-"

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