The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

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Um, hi Shina!
I was wondering if you could review this one chapter for me :3
It's called Thorns & Roses, the fifth chapter.
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Thanks so much!

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I feel bad for being so late with these reviews :( One more our and my homework will be complete. After that, it's reviewing til' midnight!

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Evi- complete ;)
Onyx- done :D
Gun- Is there a way I can review your photo without the word document? I can't open those on my computer -.-"

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HI Shina, wondering if you could review this piece of work for me.
It's called Saving Zanica, it's under Science Fiction and it's rated E
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hi shina!
i'd love your feedback/critcism on my WIP, Til Kingdom Come. i read your profile on inkpop and am so open for any 'harshness' you have to offer (;
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i classify it as fantasy, but you could also call it science-fiction, i guess. it's post-apocalyptic.

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Hey guys ^^ Just telling you I'll be a little slow for the next week due to exams, but I'm working on it ;)

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Hey Shina! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic. There are seven chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Take as long as you need! x
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Hey, Shina. When you have the time, could you review my Lyrics piece Fate (An Interpretation into English)?

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Hi Shina! I would like to have this reviewed:

Alice Who Lives Down the Rabbit Hole (Fantasy Fiction):

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Thank you very much! :D
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Hey there!
Can you do me a favour and review this:

Earth And It's Contents: The Problem With It Is. (Extract from my book.)
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Can you give me some thoughts on the humour of this piece? Thanks a million!
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Hi, can you review my poem, I really need help developing it. Thanks so much, you're doing a great job!

Title: I met a girl today
Genre: Dramatic poetry
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72941
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