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Please

Um... Hi! This is my first review for food thing. You sound really nice so I am asking you to please review my story:

Name:Learning the Truth
Genre: Other Fiction

I'd appreciate if you point out my mistakes and if you like it. Is that to much? I don't know... So hope you have enough time!!! BYE!!!!

Hi, Lils! I really need some help with this one: topic51045.html

It's a contest entry, about vampires again. Only I really need some help. Really. The deadline's August 20, so take your time. Thanks a bunch!

~Sunny

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Zombies. What more can I say.

Hi, Lily!

My, it looks like you've got a bit of a queue going on Do you mind if I add one more?

Heritage Chapter 1.1
It's fantasy, about 1350 words long, and it's a little neglected. I'd be happy to review something of yours in return. At first, I was only putting the story up to have it somewhere other than my computer, but I've learned I can really use the critique!

Thank you very much for your time in advance.

=Hyun

Hello Ms. Lily

Shina here with a request!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post585091.html#585091

It's called Cinnamon Rolls on Tuesday. It's an other fiction short story, part I. It's not complete yet, so I'll repost when I've got the whole thing done, I just need to know how it's going so far.

-Shina

I'm ready for more. Anyone else?

OK I'd really like you to see if this is any good. I know something is wrong, but i'm really trying!
Also, i'm not sure how to make a link, so sorry for any mistakes.

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Hello!!
I would like a review to this one, because I'd like to know what the mistakes are.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51580.html

this is second one. The first one is called unknown and you can review it if you want.

Pudin

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Its called The uprising. Narrative poetry

Hey Lily.
Could you review:
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Into the Depths, Chapter III, please? You can review Chapter I and II if you want, but you don't have too. I'm just asking for Chapter III because It's the one that needs critiques.

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