alliyah's poetry reviews

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A Feminist's Love Story

Would love to hear your thoughts on this! Thanks.




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And done! All caught up again.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Since you're accepting to review poetry: Out of Nowhere

Please review my work and point out anything there is needed to be pointed out.

Thank You!




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Hi @emma1045 thanks for the request! You've come to the right place. I will hopefully get that review out within the next 3 days. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Hullo alliyah! I would love a review on my poem, Not enough. I would just appreciate some general feedback. Thanks! :D
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Do whatever you want, forever <3
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Sure thing @TheBlueCat ! :) I'd be happy to!

Also, @emma1045 your work is marked as a draft, once it's open again let me know and I will review it.


Edit: I just finished BlueCat's poem, so I'm all caught up again. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Hi alliyah!
If you could, I’d love it if you could offer some criticism on this poem. <3
Winter coming
I think it got out of the Green Room rather lightly and I feel like it’s too much description without other stuff? But anyway, I’d love to hear your thoughts if you aren’t too busy!
Parlez-vous français?




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Hey, please review The Law of Wishes and Desire! <3 I need more feedback on this.
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Hullo again! Since you gave me such a good review before, I would love if you would review my haiku, Heartbreak. No hurry! :D
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Do whatever you want, forever <3
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Finally finished those last two reviews, so feel free to bring in your requests - expect about a week delay in me responding to review requests, but rest assured I will always get them eventually! :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Lol I'm here again. What a stalker. >.>

Please review Dear Victoria, You Kill Me! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Caught up again!

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Note to self: Review Lumi's poem this week. i have no choice but to love
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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You're the person I look for when I need more feedback, hehe. Please review Clash of Desires! Thanks! :D
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

- David L. Ulin




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Ah thanks! I will be checking this one out this weekend @Lightsong. :)
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return



You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott