Hey,
I really enjoyed the brutally honest wording here, and it is always refreshing to read something that's so open and vulnerable. The only critique I could give is it needs consistency. I kinda get confused because it talks about how much you want to be with this person, and then it calls that person a "coward." And perhaps that's the beauty of this poem: the confusing, mixed, genuine emotion that's displayed.
VintageSongbird
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