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I will write poems eventually.
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Previous Threads:
~ Um.. Gem's NapoWriMo poembox? ~
~ whos to say fish cant be accountants ~

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athena and the battle of self



why do i spend my time pretending at being a flower
maybe it's because i'm afraid of being seen wielding power
i pretend that i am content with being mother of the hearth
as i try to steer myself down the same path everyone else wants
they omit all other choices and condemn me for thinking of such things
how dare i think for myself but inside i still feel myself conflicted
and every truth about me i utter seems to be world ending

am i afraid of being the only one to knows what i need
do i dred the wars i will need to wage to be able to be me
i hide behind this flower i've painted and tend to fires that aren't mine
but sometimes it gets difficult when my mind alights with fire
hestia- your hearth is warm and your home is sickly sweetened,
i get badly burnt and sick every visiting weekend
hera- i do adore you and your family; i can see how important you are to zeus
after all he visits mortal women only half as much as you
aphrodite- i applaud your beauty and grace especially since
even if you tried you couldn't keep a smile from any man's face
yesterday i seemed to hear that you were happilly married;
so tell me darling how is your boyfriend aries?
i don't think i am the only one pretending
what in gaea's name is so perfect about the blame you all keep shifting?
you simply can't continue this and suggest it is i who needs mending

at last i am ready i think this war is right to wage
i went years pretending to gather kindling while fletching arrows in my rage
and practicing tactics to sheild myself from all of your sugarcoated words
lest i swallow the poison of selfsame you feed your children
though it nourishes them i acquit myself we are not the same
and to me even as you speak you build up gallows and my rage
i am tired of being seen as weak and in need of protection
i was never a wife merely a concealed weapon

for the longest time i found life in pretending i wasn't a woman
in my sleep i cinched my hips and bound my chest burning dresses
i wiped the sparse color further from my lips with their ashes
and i gave myself the powerful gifts and curses
that so easily came to a face free of blush: courage, strength, denial, hubris
the men in my dreams smiled and chastised me with roughly spoken words
to be me is to be alone, no one finds constant war a happy home
'no one wants to lay with you; no one wants to stay with you'
as if those were things that i ever wanted, i am not a pretty thing for you to pocket
they said 'no one would find you beautiful, and warriors are men you know'

now even in my dreams i shout back, 'i forgive your ignorence;
i will ignore your indolence
i forgive your smiling eyes as you try to wound me- you idiots
but the more i think on it- i hate to ignore you
as you try to tear down my walls and use graffiti to demean me
i think i'll at least give you confrontation to restore your dignity so
instead i'll wear your hasty ill-thought comments on my skin and act
adversely to disprove you for trying to define me as what you wish
even as you hold up my weaknesses in front of the throng
i can laugh and say i revealed them first

honestly even at my weakest point you cannot touch me
if i undressed myself to my barest feminity i'd be stronger than you
and you'd have half my masculinity and you spit in my face to try to
disprove it for me but i'll let it roll down my chin and look at you evenly
as i speak you are a false repitition and it seems demeaning
to even try to understand why others even look at you when you speak
the petty stumbling falsehoods and drool are what you've made your name on
but everything i say is unflinchingly accurate, said truer and faster
you can only pick up my words [if they aren't to heavy for you]
and twist them in half to repeat them crookedly you bastard
for the longest time i've spared you, i've been 'picking my battles'
i've held my envoy at bay and i haven't loosed an arrow
but i'm no longer afraid to be athena and for weeds like you
i'm no longer embarrassed to borrow demeters harrow
i've always respected someone who can toil for life's fruit
and i won't allow mine to be jenked by weeds like you




03/04/22
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hi, gem!

"athena and the battle of self" is a beautiful start to napo! your imagery is absolutely gorgeous - it paints a wonderful picture of the emotions being expressed. the reoccurring plant/flower metaphor and imagery that carried through the entire poem also really stuck with me.

like i said, amazing job! i can't wait to read what else you write this month! <3
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thank you @atlast i appreciate your commentary, i am glad you found my poem enjoyable and i will be honoured if you choose to continue to read my poetry throughout the month <333
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unwritten apologies to my many daedulous



are their eyes open wide as they fly to their safe cushioned destination
knowing they'll hit land watching as i glide upwards into harms way and
as my wings are melting does wax drip down scalding their faces
do they scream at me to change my course before it's too late
i wish i could tell them sometimes our destinations are stuck and they are parralel
i'm not afraid even as i try to reach the sparkling bright sun though i know
it is only another of apollo's tricks my plight a refraction in a glass jar
though i'll never reach it i yearn for that sparkle so much my onlooking daedulous
could i be inches from trailing my fingers along the fairydust sun maybe miles
do you see me hover there blanketed by light and fireflies
only a second longer than should be possible as i loose altitude
as the last of the golden feathered wax falls in curtains down on you
is it at least a spectacle or are you only touched by a double edged ember
as the ocean opens its arms to me do you watch in horror or see the splendor
i am expected to arch my spine and reach up towards beloved light source
but my wings weren't modeled from those of moths
i flew as a kingfisher


Image

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the hero's question


"if i slay the beast
will i be promised a life?"
hades sadly smirks


05/04/22
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alliyah says...



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Strong start Gem! Excited that you're taking this point of view for your NaPo and am enjoying the personal touches to the mythology stories and themes too.

Your second poem had some really fabulous magical lines.
could i be inches from trailing my fingers along the fairydust sun maybe miles
do you see me hover there blanketed by light and fireflies

^ Love that image right there.

Keep on writing!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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I'm glad you think so @lliyah and i'll do my best :> <333


couldn't i be ?

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fly


hermes ran so fast
he fell down; forgetting that
his sandals could fly


08/04/22
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what can i say, i ship it


i want to be him
i want my converse style sneakers to lift me from the pavement
i dont have to say i would deliver whatever you wanted
you already know; he was said to have a way with women
i think i would too, after all one would need a silver tongue
my ravishing dear i will put you in a box you are such a gift
i would wrap them and send them back to fed ex
wheres my refund; hermes cheshire smile.

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Spoiler! :
The juxtaposition of the casual modern language with the hermes imagery in that last poem makes it really interesting - you kind of read the first half thinking it's going one direction and then after the final line have to read it all back again - a fun mythology reference reveal at the end there.

Also in that first poem there are still so many great quotable lines! That is definitely a poem you should be saving in your files! <3 Best of luck if you decide to tackle more poetry in the final NaPo week; but thanks for sharing your poetry this month (& hosting jams!) either way! <3333
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Spoiler! :
Thank you @lliyah and i had a lot of fun with that last poem. haha i definitely will be savig that one aha <3


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hidden toxicity [we are all marrionettes]

venomous snakes should have warning labels
[Jörmungandr is old norse for huge monster; not clear enough?]
i guess i shouldnt blame you son
you didnt free yourself from your eternity
your pose of ouroboros tail in mouth
spewing nothing but tales of rebirth
a city must fall to be rebuilt-
odin plucked you out of the ocean he threw you in
so your acid could stand in for my guilt
what is that burning feeling in my chest
desperation or dragon's breath


we are near the end now
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bubble-gum [and all that is glossed over]

being blessed with the strength of zeus
easily became a burden [tell me when you recount the tales of valor
do you ever think about how many vases ive broken?]
my mother could never replace the sentimental value of our carriage
it cost us months of food stores to replace it
[how does one accidentally topple a building
annoying hera and ruining the villages next harvest]
no you only like to think of me
as the man who could control god like strength
you dont understand how long it took me to adjust
[and how much ive broken that cannot be repaired]
you like to see me kicking ass and chewing bubblegum
just know first i had to be a loser [with no self control]

its almost over
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master of the forge [when you become too handy]

truth isn't in the job description so lying isn't illegal
a liar can be a handyman with ease
forge you some creative new falsities before he fixes your sink
but remember a handyman can be a liar too so how can we be safe
when the people meant to fix the world spread pain
he’ll fix your sink before telling you tall tales
does it really matter what you were first
when the damage is done by what you became afterwards
if you were a criminal leaving darkness in your wake
does it always matter when positive change is made
you worked the forge making valliant blades
now here you are accosting goddesses only to claim
that it was okay and you weren't to be blamed
she is overreacting when you almost soiled her name
when i was younger i didn't know why you were defamed
i thought the reason you were disliked was only as deep as your face
you had a twisted spine and couldn't walk
your body was contorted not aesthetic at all
you had a twisted face that made it hard to speak
and maybe correlatedly you slurred your speech
or maybe you mumbled so you could say you were misheard
when all those goddesses you messed with didn't like what they heard
“no i didn't say that, you have bad hearing
no i never did that yours is such a terrible memory
no i wouldn't do that i'm cripple and you are demeaning me
i’m so helpless that i manipulate all who deal with me”
hephaestus i can't believe there was a point in time
i was so colorblind i didn't see between the lines of
these tales of yours because the aztecs
would envy the grooves you made where all your sins were lain
the vibrant red flags are staked so deep inside them
just thinking about it makes me want to close my eyes
i ask why did you do this to yourself
don’t you know because of your deeds
you made kronos himself look like an angel asleep
your spirit was so crooked filled with putrid lust and greed
i rebuke my younger self because she was naive

it’s almost done
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