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tonightwedieinbattle(tomorrowweriseagain) 03/22

between stories of
you & fate,

you
come to me in a room
full of creatives
insisting that i write
about how i hate that its cold now
& that i am taking a chance on
myself with new projects

there is
so much uncertainty
on the cusp of war

the apple fell
very far from the tree
& has been trying
to differentiate
ever since
like an apparition, you were never even there




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there is
so much uncertainty
on the cusp of war


<3

there is always something so honest (and tense) about your writing that I find incredibly refreshing and hyperspecific to you as a poet. I can't wait to follow your thread and hopefully see your more critical poetry this April! such an essential topic that deserves attention, all love to you
In a shadow there is the blessing of a shadow.
— Kuki Shūzō




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untitled

i dont quite know
how possible it is
to psychoanalyze yourself

but you know that
there is a blue image
of a little girl's dreams
vanishing
over the dark of your eyes

you push it up
just as her soul
reaches the heavens
& shares skies with
tank shells;

thick chunks, gauzy
to cauterize
my bleeding heart

(we must not forget or become desensitized to the fact that these are real people & we can do more for them than just watch.)
like an apparition, you were never even there




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@foxtails - you have such a thoughtful way of assembling your poems, I'm not sure I have words to capture it - but it's like you hint at so much more behind what you are saying and then layer all these different images / thoughts together - it makes your poems so re-readable because it feels like there is so much behind the words.

For instance

there is
so much uncertainty
on the cusp of war


I love that - and love that it could be understood nationally / societally / but also interpersonally - right before the "war" is when uncertainty brews.

Your 2nd poem is also very trippy because I see the last line as almost directed at the reader, rather than just the poetic subject - very interesting!

Hope to read more this month, you are a great poet!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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thehingeexperience

crystals & clonazepam
to keep the bad dreams away,
the growing pains
are unbearable at times
&/both

coexisting like
radical self acceptance,
struggling to blame you
for all the suffering

i read that just because
someone doesnt love you
the way you want them to
doesn't mean they
dont love you at all
like an apparition, you were never even there



The poetry of the earth is never dead.
— John Keats