That would be it. Advices and opinion (fangirling is up to you ) would be appreciated. Thanks in advance!
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far? And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale? I shall find the answers... to these questions."
Hi Iggy! Your friendly neighborhood Nerd Bird here!
I would love it if you could review the first two chapters(soon to be three) of my novel The Shifties. I however would wish to keep my soul thank you, though you may find the Shifties might take yours
I have written the first chapter of my novel. I am not sure whether I should continue it. Please tell what you felt about the story and some grammar nitpicks as well. The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1
Specifically, could you help me first find places where I can dumb down on the descriptions, and up them? They seem to hide in every dark closet, but when I do find them, I'll be able to edit them better.
Secondly, could you help me with the dialogue. I think my dialogue is bad in some places. I'm not trying to make my dialogue sound like poetry, just want to make it flow well.
Those two things would be great, you could leave out all the rest! *winks*
What exactly would you like in return? (I dislike asking for things without having to do something in return. I need the accountability to function properly!)
A million thanks!
The moment you say that one set of moral ideas can be better than another, you are, in fact, measuring them both by a standard, saying that one of them conforms to that standard more nearly than the other. C. S. Lewis
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