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Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:58 pm
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Skins says...



You've, like, totally changed your username. Awesome!

Anyways, when you find the time, could you please review my fantasy short story? It's insanely messy and illogical right now, so I'd appreciate some help to clean it up.

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Please and thank you!
Cat.
  





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Fri Sep 16, 2011 5:48 pm
joshuapaul says...



You like Poetry.
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Have a short story. (It's the closest I might ever get to poetry)
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Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:56 am
HostofHorus says...



Could I get a review on this poem? :D

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HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Wed Nov 02, 2011 2:51 am
joshuapaul says...



Damn how is this down on page 3 of WRFF?

Can you look at either of these
Lerra

or

Life after

Both horror, both new, both in need of a review. Of course I don't expect you to get to both (or either.)

JP
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Wed Nov 02, 2011 2:59 pm
MeanMrMustard says...



I'm in need of your analytic poetry prowess.
  





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Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:17 am
Kyllorac says...



*bump*
Screwing with gender since 1995.
#TNT



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Fri Jun 15, 2012 5:57 pm
firepen says...



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Hi, I'm not sure whether this falls into your acceptable reviews thingy but if it does, I would really appreciate a review! Don't worry if not though! Thank you!
Please have a look at my website: www.firepen.webs.com !
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2013 8:03 pm
Kyllorac says...



Still open.

I never closed, actually.
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Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:42 pm
kayfortnight says...



Can you please review my fantasy novel/chapter? I only put the first chapter and the prologue. I haven't got any reviews yet.
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"The way I figure it, the fall doesn't kill you. The ground does. So I blocked it."
  





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Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:57 pm
Kyllorac says...



Finished Kafka's, working on kay's.

And finished kay's.
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:47 am
Hannah says...



Me me me me me!

Please. c:
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Sun Jan 27, 2013 8:07 pm
Kyllorac says...



And done.
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 4:54 pm
Lumi says...



rips and tears and bloods and hobbitses, pl0x
regardless of warnings

the future doesn't scare me at all
  





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Sun Mar 29, 2015 5:02 pm
Kyllorac says...



Bump.
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