Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:
"Do you know what my heart says now? It says that I should forget about politics and be with you. No matter what. You're a true Queen, a Queen any King would kill for." - Prince Francis ♕
*Raises hand, and waves it like a madman* Me, me! But, first do you also review on the advanced critiques section?
You know, where entire novels are placed?
"Jesus said to her, “I am the resurrection and the life. The one who believes in me will live, even though they die; and whoever lives by believing in me will never die. Do you believe this?” -John 11:25-26
Me please? You're so sweet! You sound so desperate to help other people.
The only thing is that I've rated my story, Dancers in the Dark, 18+. There's some drug use and the main character says a swear word. It's probably nothing you haven't seen on TV, but if you didn't want to review this I'd totally understand.
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Reviews: 456