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Sat Mar 20, 2021 4:04 pm
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HJYoung says...



Exodus
SF novel-in-progress, i need help on dialogue
I stand above this all. For with every virgin kingdom, there is always an august king.
  





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Sat Mar 20, 2021 5:44 pm
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ForeverYoung299 says...



Can u pls review Cortez Shivick(Chapter 9)
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Sat Mar 20, 2021 5:53 pm
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HJYoung says...



ty
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Sun Mar 21, 2021 12:32 pm
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ChrisCalaid says...



@HJYoung Welcome to YWS! I'll be reviewing your writing tmw.

Thanks!
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Sun Mar 21, 2021 1:47 pm
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ty!
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Thu Apr 08, 2021 3:38 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Hi, BrokenHeartsAri here to drop some poems that need some reviews.

1.I'm coming home

2.Broken

I hope you get a chance to check these out!
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Fri Apr 09, 2021 5:20 am
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ChrisCalaid says...



@BrokenHeartsAri
Okay! I'll see if I can review them this weekend.

Thanks for the request!
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Mon Apr 19, 2021 8:53 am
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ChrisCalaid says...



@BrokenHeartsAri I'm so sorry for the time it took me to review it. I didn't have enough time since I started judging for April Madness. Fortunately, I had reviewed the first poem!

Again I'm very sorry and hope it is okay with you.

Have a nice day!
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Thu May 06, 2021 2:12 pm
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felistia says...



Hi there.

I was wondering if you could review my novel. I currently have 7 chapters and was looking for someone to read the novel as I wrote it.

It's an action\adventure\fantasy novel.

Here's the links to the parts I currently have.

Prologue: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue

1: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1

2: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 2

3: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3

4: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 4

5: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 5

6: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 6

Thank you in advance. :D

Best regards
Felistia
  





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Fri Jun 11, 2021 5:45 am
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ChrisCalaid says...



@felistia @BrokenHeartsAri Sorry for the late reply and review. As I posted on my wall, there was no internet in my country for about 40 days, and it just came back a few days ago.I will try to review them as fast as I can.

Thanks!
~Chris Calaid
  





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Wed Jun 16, 2021 8:05 am
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ChrisCalaid says...



@BrokenHeartsAri I reviewed all your requested poems. Thank you for the request!
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