It has a few reviews already, but I have made major edits since then, and there is an important short story writing competition coming up in December so I would like to get better. I will appreciate any and all criticism that you have, and I'll happily re-edit it too, if it keeps the story in the 1k word range. Thanks
Hello there! I would highly appreciate if you can find some time to read a small piece I recently wrote. I m thinking about adding it to a novel I m working on but I m not sure about the story line. It is a first draft and there might be some typos in it. The title is Better than nicotine. Thank you for your time
"The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth." — Kate Chopin, The Awakening
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