It has a few reviews already, but I have made major edits since then, and there is an important short story writing competition coming up in December so I would like to get better. I will appreciate any and all criticism that you have, and I'll happily re-edit it too, if it keeps the story in the 1k word range. Thanks
Hello there! I would highly appreciate if you can find some time to read a small piece I recently wrote. I m thinking about adding it to a novel I m working on but I m not sure about the story line. It is a first draft and there might be some typos in it. The title is Better than nicotine. Thank you for your time
I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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