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Sat Apr 30, 2016 3:09 am
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Eternity says...



Hello mates. I'm Eternity. So I've only been on this site for a little bit now, but I have the whole hang of it down. If you would like a review, feel free to ask below. I'll be majorly active on Sunday for review day (:

If you would like to, heres some pieces you can review if you want to review:
Distanced (Part One)
Sorrowful...
Last edited by Eternity on Sun Sep 11, 2016 2:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sat Apr 30, 2016 9:53 am
felistia says...



Hi Eternity. :D

I would really like it if you could review this for me https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-edited-124445 It's the first chapter of my fantasy novel.
I'll also review your short story Sorrowful... :D
  





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Sat Apr 30, 2016 10:29 pm
Eternity says...



I'll be sure to once Review day starts!
  





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Sun May 01, 2016 7:20 pm
DrFeelGood says...



I would like your review on my work:
A Night Before the Exam...

Thanks!
  





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Sun May 01, 2016 7:22 pm
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Eternity says...



I was just about to get to that! I'll be on my way now.
  





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Tue May 03, 2016 5:11 pm
Charm says...



Can you review my poem?
Homeless Homesickness
Please :D
  





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Wed May 04, 2016 2:25 am
Eternity says...



Sure thing guys, I'll get to them ASAP.
  








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