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ExOmelas
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Points 31396
Reviews 760
Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm
ExOmelas says... · Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:28 pm
Hi all, please could you review the latest chapter of my sci-fi series Monkey Boy's Adventures in Space?

Monkey Boy's Adventures In Space - 2.2

Happy to provide a synopsis of the story so far if necessary.

Cheers, Biscuits

What fools these mortals be!
William Shakespeare
A Midsummer Night's Dream


Who cares if one more light goes out?
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penfeme
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Points 137
Reviews 28
Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm
penfeme says... · Fri Jul 15, 2016 9:13 pm
I would greatly appreciate a review for my poem "all that I am is starlight, dim" - thanks! :)
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JuliasSneezer
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Reviews 58
Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am
JuliasSneezer says... · Mon Jul 18, 2016 11:58 am
Hi, everyone!

I would really appreciate it if someone could please review the first chapter of my novel in progress:

The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

Thank you to anyone who reviews! Anyone who reviews, I promise to review something of theirs! Many thanks,

-Cupcakes :smt023
"When in doubt, improvise!"
-Winny the woodpecker
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Kazeybear
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Reviews 64
Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am
Kazeybear says... · Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:43 am
I would love a review on my poem at; Pain

Thank you very much!

~Kazey
We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury
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MemeQueen
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Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm
MemeQueen says... · Mon Jul 25, 2016 7:26 pm
If it's not too much trouble, could I have a review on my first chapter? Thank you alll.
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Redbox275
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Points 1931
Reviews 91
Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am
Redbox275 says... · Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:43 am
I would like someone to review my short story

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories

The Dead Boy, the Shattered Locket, and the Broken Childhood Memories[url][/url]
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MayaM
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Reviews 8
Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm
MayaM says... · Wed Jul 27, 2016 10:49 pm
If someone could review my short story called: Alone with my Thoughts that would be incredible! Thanks!
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emoglobiin
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Reviews 4
Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm
emoglobiin says... · Sun Aug 07, 2016 2:18 pm
I'm a new one here and could use some advise on my writing. I'd appreciate it if you read my short story "The A Team". :D link: https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/emoglobiin/The-A-Team-130875
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Kazeybear
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Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm
Kazeybear says... · Thu Aug 11, 2016 6:58 pm
i would love a review on my most recent poem, Only Time Will Tell
We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect - Anaïs Nin
You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you - Ray Bradbury
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Ejay1806
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Reviews 43
Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am
Ejay1806 says... · Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:55 am
I am looking for reviews for my poem Friend and Money:A Mystery
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restlessheart14
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Points 138
Reviews 26
Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm
restlessheart14 says... · Sun Aug 21, 2016 11:49 pm
Hey all! I would like to request a review on my piece called night and day. It is a short poem that highlights romanticism and sound devices. Thanks :)

Night and Day
Restlessheart

"Each day means a new 24 hours. Each day means everything's possible again. You live in the moment, you die in the moment, you take it all one day at a time."
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Vellichor
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Points 2989
Reviews 42
Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am
Vellichor says... · Sun Sep 04, 2016 2:34 am
If anyone had some free time, I would very much appreciate any feedback on my poem, The Power of Words. I'm new to poetry, so don't expect much xD Thank you all!
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Chappiez
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Points 186
Reviews 9
Thu Sep 15, 2016 12:57 am
Chappiez says... · Thu Sep 15, 2016 12:57 am
Would someone please review my story, Jolted?

Jolted

Thanks!
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TheOneNamedZoe
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Reviews 22
Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:45 am
TheOneNamedZoe says... · Tue Sep 20, 2016 2:45 am
Please review my three works!
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KaityKakes2889
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Sat Oct 01, 2016 7:48 pm
KaityKakes2889 says... · Sat Oct 01, 2016 7:48 pm
If you have time, I would appreciate it.....


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"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind