"Video games don't affect kids. If Pacman had affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills, and listening to repetitive electronic music." --anonymous/banner.
Hello again. ^_^ I have another piece for you, if you need to add more to your count. It's the second poem in the Seven Deadly Sins series; it's Vanity.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
Hey! Are you still doing these? If so, it would be great if you could crit The Immortals #8. It follows on from the one I put in the advanced critics forum. Its not very long but its my personal favourite. No deaths, just Aedomir lying under the midnight stars lol
If you like, I'd adore you forever if you gave me a crit on this:
topic25922.html -it's the first part of a fairytale retelling (the version of the Little Mermaid where she tries to kill the prince and princess then kills herself at the end). But honestly, don't feel obliged!
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