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Lightning cleaves the sky in two -
And suddenly the world is a violent chaos of lashing branches and then -
Silence.
Even the smells storm.
bleeding tree-blood onto the peaty earth.
Ayra wrote:All of a sudden, several things happen at once; thunder bursts over the sky with a welter of sound, light flares, and the heavens throw down spears of rain.
Ayra wrote:The air is thick with leaves, torn from their branches in the fury of the storm.
Ayra wrote:More lightning stabs towards the earth in an erratic spider-web of blue-white cracks.
Ayra wrote:It even smells storm. Breathe deeply, and there is a heady cocktail of scents; the bitter tang of smoke, the cold rain-smell, the biting fury of the wind: brisk and metal-clean.
Ayra wrote:Streams are swollen to the brim.
Ayra wrote:The biggest crack of thunder yet shakes the roots of the earth, sending jarring shock-waves through the field. Lightning shatters the sky into a myriad of grey-black fragments, fused together by white-hot lines.
Ayra wrote:Rain ceases to fall; trees sway to a halt; wind subsides to a soundless whisper.
Ayra wrote:The boughs of shattered trees drip with rain; bleeding onto the peaty earth.
Ayra wrote:And it is strange; while the woods are a wreckage, not a single stalk of wheat has been snapped.
Ayra wrote:Or perhaps the wheat, fragile as it is, is unarmed because it bent under the bent instead of fighting it...
Ayra wrote:And from somewhere within the wounded forest, one brave bird begins to sing.
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All of a sudden, several things happen at once;
flares, [delete comma] and the heavens throw down spears of rain.
The air is thick with leaves, torn from their branches in the fury.
It even smells storm.
The storm is over.
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