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Welcome~
Make yourselves at home.

My reviews come in two styles. I can do an analytical review in which I will review your piece as a person writing a review to a literary magazine, or I can do a direct review which is what is traditionally done on YWS.

If you want a traditional review, just put up your work. I'll like it after I'm done so that I can keep track of where I am in my thread.

If you want an analytical review, you have some choices to make. Please answer the questions below and I'll like the post after I'm done with the review.

Do you want me to do a comparison?
-If so, do you want me to compare a few of your own pieces?
-or do you want me to compare your piece with something else?
Do you want a review about your particular poetic devices chosen?
Would you like me to focus on one aspect of the poem?

Between both reviews you can request that I answer certain questions, review based on subject, words, or overall appeal to an audience. Just put this up with your request.

If I missed something in my review, send me a PM, or post on the thread to get my attention.

Thank you.
Last edited by Aley on Fri Jul 10, 2015 4:17 pm, edited 10 times in total.




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Could I please have a review on my poem Schedule ~A Mother's Day Poem~?

I'm hoping to be able to revise it and have it done by Sunday, although I'm not sure how possible that is with my busy schedule.

Thanks in advance. Here's the link...
work.php?id=101393
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Hi! I'd love it if you could review this for me: work.php?id=101411 Let me know if there's anything you need reviewed in return!
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HI! I'd love it if you could review my book:) It's gonna be a series, and i'm just getting started working on a blog that will handle all of the cannon.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101564
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Could you read my short story?

[url][work.php?id=101636/url]
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Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828




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I'm slowly working backwards up this list guys. Thanks for your patience.




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Review? I had warned you.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


We are masters of our silences, and slaves of our words




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Don't mind the formatting. >>
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


We are masters of our silences, and slaves of our words




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Hello there,

I would really appreciate a review of this piece if possible; thanks in advance :)

Peer Jumping




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hello, im currently in the midst of writing an emotion true story based on a situation in my life at the moment and was hoping if you could give it a read. It is not completed, but I would really appreciate your thoughts on it thus far!

here's the link!

A Worrisome Heart of Something Great




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Hey Aley. If you have time, could you please review this for me?

Thank you ^.^

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Paper Hearts

or any of my other poems
Salt in the air, blood in my veins, no more black clouds, just colorful days...




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Hi Aley. Me again :3 I wondered if you could do a comparison for me between these two poems? They are quite different but both supposed to be about war. I wondered which was best (for a competition)

Dead (Climbing Rhyme)

and

Aren't you afraid of the silence?

Yoúr reviews are so helpful!
Trust in God and all else follows.

Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014
Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015
Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015



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