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Hecate
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Thu May 22, 2014 8:55 am
Hecate says... · Thu May 22, 2014 8:55 am
Hey!

Could you do a traditional YWS review for me?

A work in progress

I'd love it if you concentrated on words and overall appeal. Also, what you got out of the poem.

I'm still in the process of revising it, but I thought I could get some more input.




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Gardevite
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Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:38 pm
Gardevite says... · Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:38 pm
Hello Aley. ^^ Would you mind reviewing work.php?id=112791for me? In like, regular YWS direct review style. The reviews on it aren't really helpful. >.>
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Kanome
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Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:44 pm
Kanome says... · Sat Jun 28, 2014 9:44 pm
Blank Soul

Please review for me? c:
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Aley
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Morrigan
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Mon Jul 21, 2014 1:22 pm
Morrigan says... · Mon Jul 21, 2014 1:22 pm
Ooh, nice transparent avvie, Aley!

Can you please give me one of your good old reviews on Calm. please? It seems all I'm getting is complements. Which is okay, I guess, but I know it's not perfect and is probably lacking in a lot of areas.
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EmmVeePi
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Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:47 am
EmmVeePi says... · Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:47 am
I am a traditional prose writer who has more recently dabbled in poetry. Would like a review on style(I am actually trying to mimic an antique form, message me if you would like to know more), imagery, and subject matter. Dont bother with word usage as I know I've used some strict redundancies.

Please and thank you.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=114332




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Aley
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Pompadour
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Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:10 pm
Pompadour says... · Wed Aug 13, 2014 10:10 pm
Y'ola, Aley. Could you please rip this: the sky caught the smoke rings you blew from your lips apart? I posted it a while back but I was hoping to edit it and ... *drivels*

Thank ye!
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paula08
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Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:39 am
paula08 says... · Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:39 am
Hi!
I would really appreciate if you could review my work:

A breath of lavander
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Ranay333
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Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:40 am
Ranay333 says... · Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:40 am
Hello,

i only have two poems up but I was hoping to request for a review on them Bounded by memories and Shattered soul. just an opinion would be great as well. I wrote both on a whim so they still need some work.




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Aley
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Fri Jul 10, 2015 4:49 pm
Aley says... · Fri Jul 10, 2015 4:49 pm
Hello everyone! I'm catching up on reviews and looking for new ones so if you're interested in a review, hit me up. You can see examples of my work on my profile under my reviews.




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TheShauzer
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Sat Jul 11, 2015 1:23 pm
TheShauzer says... · Sat Jul 11, 2015 1:23 pm
What have I written?

Would appreciate an overall review of this piece, thanks a lot if you decide to! :)
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