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PixieStix

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Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:49 pm

PixieStix says... · Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:49 pm

Hey I'm Pix and I've been on YWS for a..pretty long time. To be honest, I think reviewing is fun so I'm up for it.

The things I review:

-Poems
-Lyrics
-Short stories ( Fantasy, Romance, Action/adventure.)
-Chapter works (Same as short stories ^)

Please feel free to request a review here, or you can post the link on my wall and I'll get right to it! The longest it'll take me to review will be two days max. I usually get it done right away. So, post you're link here or on my wall!

~Pixie

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All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!

youngwriter

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Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:42 pm

youngwriter says... · Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:42 pm

Hiyaa:) OK here's my poem :
work.php?id=94616#comments

and please can you not say anything about the layout? Basically I set it out properly, but it changed it, so after every comma should be a new line, after every full stop should be a new stanza...
Thankss:)

I <3 Turtles

PixieStix

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Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:59 pm

PixieStix says... · Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:59 pm

No problem. : )

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TheAceofAll

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Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:06 am

TheAceofAll says... · Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:06 am

Hey could u review the first few chapters of my book Welcome to Orba Nova? I just finnished rewriting the first chapters and could use a good review

work.php?id=96135
Thanks

“ You can't control life, [in writing] at least you can control your version.”
―Chuck Palahniuk, Stranger Than Fiction
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PixieStix

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Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:29 am

PixieStix says... · Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:29 am

Sure! I might not be able to do it soon though...Not much Internet connection. But I'll try!

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misshayleeelizabeth

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Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:34 pm

misshayleeelizabeth says... · Fri Jul 06, 2012 8:34 pm

Hi, I am new here... I would love for you to review my story.. Here is the link: work.php?id=96290 I would love the feed back you could give me. Let know what i can do better and what i am good at.. Thank you so much

PixieStix

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Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:25 am

PixieStix says... · Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:25 am

Sure! I'll do it when I can get on a computer.

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davidechoe13

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Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:55 am

davidechoe13 says... · Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:55 am

work.php?id=96313

Thanks if you do i would appreciate it.

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PixieStix

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Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:30 pm

PixieStix says... · Mon Jul 09, 2012 6:30 pm

Again, I can't get on a laptop. I'll try to do it tommarow.

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SpeedyPencil

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Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:01 am

SpeedyPencil says... · Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:01 am

could you please review this?: work.php?id=96348 thankyou so much! I appreciate it!

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