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I need you both to retry the links, please. : ) They didn't work.

ok here is the full link to my work I would like you to review work.php?id=95601
here is a link to the other parts in order

part one: work.php?id=73506

part two: work.php?id=73832

part 3: work.php?id=74855

just in case you needed them so you will understand the story.

Thanks. I'll try to review it soon.

Hi! My short story is posted in three parts, but altogether its not hugely long (4,000 words). I would love, love, love it if you could read all three, but if you only read one or two that would be okay too. I am most worried about the middle, because I haven't gotten any feedback on that yet. Thank you so much!
work.php?id=96979

here's the link again...work.php?id=96765
thanks

work.php?id=96765

hope this one works.

Thanks a lot.

Lol. I'll try to get all three of them done sometime over the weekend. With school and everything, It might be a little late. But it shall be done.

Pix!

This honestly doesn't have to be reviewed for a while. I know you have school and everything. So, no rush at all on this.

But my first chapter is lonely. So, when you have the time, I'd love your feedback. work.php?id=97055

Thanks!

Hello

I would appreciate if you'd review this. I'm not quite sure what should be fixed but I'm not completely satisfied with how it feels while reading it. Any criticism and advice will help!

work.php?id=97088

I shall do these in order...So that this isn't unfair or anything.

And Rocky, happy to see you posting stuff again. I'll review you're chapter soon.

Celticmusicgirl
Aurrora
Puckerman96
Rocky (TheLuckyTurtle)
Klara1882

Will get it done soon, promise. I shall update this post, telling you which one's are finished.

Hey PixieStix, I posted on you wall like you suggested ( Or messaged you, I don't know the difference on this site) But you must have missed it

Anyways I would love a review if and when you feel up to it!
work.php?id=97530
If not then just lemmi know ^^.

I know your a busy person but when ever you can, I'd like you to review a couple of chapters from my book. Take your time too

Chapter one http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93753


Chapter two http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97019


Thanks!

Could you please review my poem. Its under Poetry-Romantic. The name is Love.

hey i would love to have a review please thank you!

This thread is now closed on reviews. I will open it up again later.