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ZaBodMoger
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:32 pm
ZaBodMoger says... · Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:32 pm
I have a couple chapters of a story and haven't gotten any reviews yet. I would really appreciate it if you would review mine. Let me know if you have anything you would like me to review. It takes till chapter 3 or 4 for the fantasy aspects to kick in and I will get those up as soon as I have enough points.
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PixieStix
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:50 pm
PixieStix says... · Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:50 pm
Ok. Sure. Do you want all the chapters reviewed or just the first one? And can you re-try the link? It isn't working.
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ZaBodMoger
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:36 pm
ZaBodMoger says... · Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:36 pm
If you have time for both it would be apreciated, but you can just do one
work.php?id=96345
Ever had something clawing at your insides? A creature you don't want to let out?




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PixieStix
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:01 pm
PixieStix says... · Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:01 pm
Okay. I'll get it done sometime next week. Going on vacation.
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ZaBodMoger
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Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:09 pm
ZaBodMoger says... · Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:09 pm
Alrigthy then. Thanks
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Carlito
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Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:31 pm
Carlito says... · Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:31 pm
This song of mine has no reviews and that makes me sad.
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PixieStix
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Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:32 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Jul 13, 2012 11:32 pm
I will do it...later.
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Rainn
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Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:03 pm
Rainn says... · Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:03 pm
Hello Pixi! One of my creations only got one review, and that was by my sister who I asked.
If you could take the time to look at this, it would be greatly appreciated.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96284
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stevie415017
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Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:20 pm
stevie415017 says... · Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:20 pm
Will you please review my 4 1/2 chapters of my book The war of night and day fantacy romance work.php?id=96193




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PixieStix
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Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:09 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:09 pm
All reviews are done. Stevie, if you want me to review all you're chapters, it'll take a while.
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stevie415017
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Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:33 pm
stevie415017 says... · Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:33 pm
ok thanks for the heads up. ps can u review the story not my grammer and spelling i know its bad.




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PixieStix
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Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:50 pm
PixieStix says... · Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:50 pm
Sure thing. :)
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PixieStix
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Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:52 pm
PixieStix says... · Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:52 pm
Sevie: Will review the remaining three chapters soon.

More reviews welcome~!
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ShakespeareWallah
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Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:31 am
ShakespeareWallah says... · Wed Aug 15, 2012 6:31 am
Hey Pix,
could you take a look at this work.php?id=96765....it's kind of a book review and I'm confused to where it stands.
Thanks, appreciate it a lot




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Celticmusicgirl
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Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:14 am
Celticmusicgirl says... · Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:14 am
work.php?id=95601 please and if you need to read the other parts just let me know and I will give you links to them.
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