K's Killa Kritiques

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ToritheMonster
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Fri May 03, 2013 3:13 am
ToritheMonster says... · Fri May 03, 2013 3:13 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101321#c359205

This is prose, so if you don't consider it poetry and don't want to review it, it's all good. :smt003

If you do, thank you in advance!
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Januaryblues
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:50 am
Januaryblues says... · Wed Jun 19, 2013 6:50 am
Hey Kar,

could you review this for me, please?

Looking Up

Thanks




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Karzkin
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:14 pm
Karzkin says... · Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:14 pm
Tori, no prose. Sorry.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Karzkin
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Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:42 pm
Karzkin says... · Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:42 pm
Other Blues done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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Twit
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Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:04 am
Twit says... · Sun Aug 18, 2013 12:04 am
Peep Show, thanks.
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Dmytra
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Sat Aug 24, 2013 9:07 am
Dmytra says... · Sat Aug 24, 2013 9:07 am
Please, could you review this? I will certainly return the favor.

Thanks so much,
Dmytra




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Karzkin
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Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:02 am
Karzkin says... · Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:02 am
Twit done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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Karzkin
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Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:31 am
Karzkin says... · Sun Sep 01, 2013 6:31 am
Dmytra done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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indieeloise
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Tue Nov 26, 2013 9:07 pm
indieeloise says... · Tue Nov 26, 2013 9:07 pm
It's prose poetry, I promise. I apologize for the terrible formatting. Much more marginalized in the Word document I originally typed it up in.

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Karzkin
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Wed Nov 27, 2013 3:00 pm
Karzkin says... · Wed Nov 27, 2013 3:00 pm
Indie done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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BadNarrator
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Sun Dec 29, 2013 5:15 am
BadNarrator says... · Sun Dec 29, 2013 5:15 am
Endless Summer
First you will awake in disbelief, then
in sadness and grief and when you wake
the last time, the forest you've been
looking for will turn out to be
right in the middle of your chest.




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Karzkin
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Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:12 pm
Karzkin says... · Wed Jan 01, 2014 4:12 pm
BadNarrator done.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.




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Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:28 am
Laure says... · Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:28 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=107372

Hi, I would appreciate it a lot if you could review this poem for me. *bows*




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Karzkin
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Fri Jan 01, 2016 12:30 pm
Karzkin says... · Fri Jan 01, 2016 12:30 pm
After a short pause, we're back in business.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

#TNT

All Hail the undisputed king of the YWS helicopter game.

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