K's Killa Kritiques

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Karzkin
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:48 pm
Karzkin says... · Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:48 pm
Y'all know the drill.

The Rules

1. Poetry only

2. I tell it like it is, yo.

3. I play the saxophone a lot. You may have to wait a little. Or a lot. Or indefinitely.
Last edited by Karzkin on Sat Jan 02, 2016 7:33 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Lumi
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Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:43 am
Lumi says... · Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:43 am
Watch me pop that ch-- I mean be your first review request.
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Karzkin
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Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:58 am
Karzkin says... · Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:58 am
Done. Didn't need much, just a scratching.
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Karzkin
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Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:16 pm
Karzkin says... · Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:16 pm
Donezors.
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Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:23 pm
youngwriter says... · Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:23 pm
work.php?id=96306 review mine please?:)

PS. The work doesnt set out properly, so after every 4 lines its a new stanza x
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Karzkin
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Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:40 am
Karzkin says... · Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:40 am
Done.
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Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:02 pm
Master_Yoda says... · Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:02 pm
This please: work.php?id=96465
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Karzkin
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Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:16 pm
Karzkin says... · Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:16 pm
Done. The review was uninspired (a far cry from the poem itself).
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Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:33 am
Rydia says... · Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:33 am
Please and thank you!
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:25 pm
prolixity says... · Mon Jul 23, 2012 3:25 pm
This please, when you get a chance.
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Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:30 pm
Rainn says... · Mon Jul 23, 2012 4:30 pm
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Hello, Would you mind doing a review for me? I like harsh (:
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Karzkin
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Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:52 pm
Karzkin says... · Tue Jul 24, 2012 12:52 pm
Done Rainn's (because it was relatively quick). Sheesh, a backlog! And right when I went back to uni D:
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