Aww, this was sad. I'm getting a black moor for my birthday this weekend, they are such cute little things, what did you name yours? I'm really sorry it died and I'm sure it wasn't your fault. This poem was packed with emotion, sadness and life. It was so amazingly written with lines as capturing as your wording. It pulled at my heart strings and left me feeling sad. It's amazing you can ease such emotions in to your readers so easily with words. Your talent is amazingly strong and so clever. I want to read more.
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