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Alright, I reviewed AliceDreams's chapter. Can someone review Twisted Fate? It's the first chapter.
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I gotcha covered Fornight! :), could someone help me out with this piece though? It's my first actually half way decent short story but it needs a lot of work because my short story writing is not particuarly good.

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Hi guys. This is the first chapter of my book Risk. It is uneddited, so please forgive the errors. Thank you so much. Please go check it out an d leave a review. Any request of any sort can be made :)
Stay Dreaming! ;)




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Dear, Candiddreamer
Your review is done and I hope it helped in one way or another.
Now if the person who post below me would be so kind as to review the first chapter of my story.
The Witch's Feather (Chapter One)
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Serenephantom :)

Going to review your chapter now! The title sounds good, can't wait.

I hope the person below me, or anyone really, would be interested in reviewing my work, The Caffeine.

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:) :) :)




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On it, sa!

I had warned you.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


We are masters of our silences, and slaves of our words




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On it, @BlackNether12 !
Funny since I asked you in your own thread, but here's the link to mine!
A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1




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@wildwildcat

I should review one of your works now. *NEBULA!*




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I don't know how to link this but if you look on my profile you will find it
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Looking for constructive criticism!
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?




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Looks like I'm reviewing you.




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I I will review you, cause I want
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You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?




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Poetry's not my forte but I can give it a shot. ^_^

Can someone review this: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 1: Yes, A Charming Man, Indeed.




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Hello! Can someone review: Sorceress, Chapter 5?

Oops, I posted twice. Just click on the link in my second post, I guess!
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Hello!

Would someone mind reviewing

Sorceress: Chapter 5

Thanks!
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