Vervain's Review Lair

Yeah, it's fine if its delayed .3. Please review?

A Slightly Special Morning (But not THAT amazing)

I would like advice on how to incorporate the environment more (since I seem to be pretty bad at description). Thanks!

All done; I'm (quite obviously) back from my trip, so request away!

(bump to let y'all know I'm still alive and accepting, at 0/3)

Hello! Could you review this chapter of my story!

A Modern Day Knight. Chapter 1.

Tear this piece to bits! I'm ready! https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/TheStormAroundMe/Chapter-One-121099
-Grace

Could I get a review on this?https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/ThatAndalite/The-Demons-Game-Arianna-122400

Thank you!

Sorry for the delay on these! They'll all be done within the next day, promise.

That puts me at 3/3, so requests are temporarily closed until I get these filled~

I'm so so so so so sorry that it's taking me this long to do things. Stuff has come up, and a lot of it—I think I'm going to have to shut down my WRFF thread for a while, so after this post, requests are closed.

For the two of you I still haven't reviewed, @TheStormAroundMe, @ThatAndalite, I'll get your reviews done as soon as possible. Thank you so so so so much for your patience!

So I'm open and accepting again!

A note: Requests will probably take me a day or two to get around to, but I am still accepting only 3 at a time, so hopefully I'll be able to get them in. If I take more than two days, feel free to poke me and ask what's up -- most likely, I got really involved in something and forgot I had requests still waiting, oops.

So, with that in mind! Accepting once more!

Hey there, I heard harsh reviews and was sold. I am currently working on my retelling of Norse Mythology and am so far through the creation narrative. I would very much appreciate your criticism https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/EmmVeePi/Norse-Creation-Narrative-122887 Please, and thank you in advance.
Emm

Hi, can you review this poem for me please?

Endangered

Thanks in advance

@EmmVeePi @paula08 - both done! And thank you very much for your requests~

Accepting: 0/3

Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.1] for me!

Hi! If you're still reviewing, I would appreciate if you would review mine!
Photographs Are Worth More Than A Thousand Words If You Look At Them The Right Way
I love to get feedback from a lot of people. If you're busy, I understand! Have a good day!

Hey! Sorry, but I didn't realize it had been this long; I'm going to go ahead and re-close this thread, because it doesn't look like I'll be able to keep it open. Sorry to disappoint!