Hi Icy! If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken" "Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't" Cowards die many times before their deaths; the valiant never taste of death but once
I saw your post and was wondering if you would be interested in reviewing my novel Longing of a Maiden Rose? I'm already getting a lot of feedback because of RevMo and I see that on some points the reviewers agree and on other points they don't, where I could maybe get another opinion to get final feedback for some scenes.
I saw that you are accepting, and I was wondering if you would like to take a look at my novella, The Old Man And The Boy. It is a really simple story, and has 8 short parts and an epilogue. The first part has a lot of reviews but I really need to understand how the readers see it as a whole.
Would you like to check out my novel Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 1)? I would really appreciate having a continuous reader/reviewer which you've said you're up for. So if you like it, I have three and a half chapters up at the moment for you to check out
Hello! I am brand new here, and joined looking for some feedback on my novel I'm currently working on. At the moment it is 3 chapters, and 12,591 words.
As for the genre, it's almost historical fiction, but set in a fictional world, with light steampunk elements. It's in a military setting as well.
I'd be super appreciative if you could give it a look and let me know what you think: first impressions, critique, general thoughts on the story, etc.
Hey there, IcyFlame! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.
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I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities. — Dr. Seuss
