Will Review Novels, Chapters & Short Stories

So as standard, I prefer to review novels in a chapter by chapter sense. I'll also review short stories but please don't ask me to review poetry because I have no idea what I'm talking about xD

For novels, I prefer to start at the beginning and read the whole thing but if you've desperately got one specific chapter that you want looking at and don't want me to read the rest (for whatever reason) then just let me know.

I will review pretty much anything you throw at me, though my knowledge of historical events can be limited so I won't be any good on fact checking for things like that. I do love a good bit of fantasy, so if you've got any of that I'll be a happy camper!

I'll even review fan fiction, but may not be very good at it if I haven't read/watched whatever it's based on....

So feel free to post below! I've cleared all of my previous review requests from this post so I can get to you asap.

Icy

Hi there,
I'm currently working on a novel and have posted the first couple of chapters here:
post882401.html#p882401

any advice/critique would be hugely appreciated. I plan to work through 1-2 chapters per week.

Thanks in advance
JP

Hello IcyFlame!

This sounds perfect, I've just started to write a novel, called Takers, and it'd be good to know that at least one person will be reading it!

So far I have only posted the prologue, but I've got plans already laid out for where I want to take it, how it will develop etc. (and yes it'll be more than the five chapters you ask ). I hope you'll like it, and end up stalking up, and if you do I'll be sure to keep you posted on updates!

Thanks very much,
WTMeighan

Hi.
I'm working on a novel, it's a Fantasy/perhaps bordering sci-fi eventually...I love constructive criticism, so go at it. I have the first two chapters up at the current moment, and am currently going over the third and will probably wait until tomorrow or the day after to post it. If you're interested, feel free to take a look at it whenever you can.

The link is:
novel.php?id=1549

Hey there Icy! I just started a new novel not to long ago and I have chapters 1-7 posted. I was wondering if you could have a look at them. I have fifteen chapters written so far and I'm about halfway through the novel, so I'm pretty sure I've passed the first requirement. Thanks! =]] viewtopic.php?t=83032

I have a finished novel called Animal I'm posting up now. First 2 chaps up but more coming soon. It's quite the excellent piece if I do say so myself. Got an agent requesting pages so here's hoping for rep so it can be put to print!

As always I'll return the favor with reviews to ur work as well.

'Allo! I would absolutely love some feedback on my novella, Crazy Little Thing. So far just the first three chapters are up, and I have no idea when the next one will be posted. It doesn't need to be crazy, in depth, nit-picky stuff - I'm really more looking for general feedback on what you like/dislike about the characters and where you'd like to see the story go. I'm planning a major editing freak out as soon as I finally get the thing finished, but knowing if you hate someone you're not supposed to hate would be really helpful.

Thank you!

Hey IcyFlame! Was wondering if you could drop a review on a my new short novel? http://youngwriterssociety.com/topic84159.html

Reviving this!

Hey, there! I've written a novel and so far have the first two chapters up. I'll be posting more chapters as I earn more points and will update my post here. Would you mind reviewing them and tell me what you think?

I won't be posting the entire book, because I don't want the whole thing to be out on the internet. I'll be posting the first ten chapters on here and if you're interested in reading more, I would gladly send you the rest in a private message or email.

It is a Duel First-Person Narrative, so each chapter switches between the characters, Lydia and Daniel speaking.

The Fighter of Aldea - Chapter One - Lydia

The Fighter of Aldea - Chapter Two - Daniel

If you don't want to read it because I don't have all ten up yet, I understand and will post again once I have them up. Also, if you don't want to read it because of not posting the whole thing on the site, I understand that too. Just let me know what you'd like to do. Thanks!

-Lefty

Hi! I was wondering if you could review my novel, A Song Named Alice. I'm having trouble getting anyone to review the second chapter. The first chapter has a few reviews already on it, but the second one needs some love. Could you help?

A Song Named Alice Chapter 2 (part 1 of 2)
A Song Named Alice Chapter 2 (part 2 of 2)

Feel free to check out the first chapter, too! The reviews are up to date on everything I've written, so what you're saying would be current and new. I'm looking for as much help on the novel as I can get, so do as much as you can for it. I hope you check them out. Thanks!

Also, the genre is fantasy and action/adventure as well. If that helps.

Heya! Im just starting getting all my chapters out, but here is my newest revised chapter 1 for my Shifties novel.

The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED

There will be more to follow! o/

Hello @IcyFlame

I saw your post in the people's tab so I thought I'd make a request.

You already reviewed my first chapter(It was very helpful) but that was a month or so ago so you probably need to read it again. I have four parts up at the moment. I'll link them down here.

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1

Thanks in advance.

Sure thing, Harry!

Going to mark them here to keep track...


The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 4.1


Done!

Ready for new things to review!