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Hello there. Lily.

Could you review this poem for me?

I would be really very grateful. :smt003

Thank you. You are awesome. :D
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Doneskies!!!
Who's next!?
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think you could review my stuff?
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Hey I just wrote this weird story. Its short but on dark side, and I've never written anything like this before. If you review it, it would be great. Heres the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post850247.html#p850247
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You should review my novel. I'm going to post Chapter 1, because in order to understand chapter 2, you need chapter 1 but I want you to review chapter 2

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Boom! Done!! And I have a very long weekend ahead of me with nothing to do so some requests would be amazing!!!
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This is the first chapter of my novel. It is fantasy, and I would be very happy if you reviewed it. Thanks in advance.
Want a heavenly review?

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Please read my novel, the shift. It science fiction. You can find it on my portfolio. Kthnxbai! :)




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Lilly! I am here to request a review! (of course....) Would you be willing to read my poem? I would be very grateful!

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HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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Whoooah! Done!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Lily!
Could I bug you for a review on this? topic82203.html
Thanks so much if you get around to it<5
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Done!
I maybe without a permanent house but I do have internet which is more than I expected but since my boyfriend works in the mornings, I figure, what better way to spend the mornings then reviewing...so please, request!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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I know you haven't read the rest but maybe just do the grammar part? I'll love you forever, Lil(: topic82394.html

Please, and thank you<3

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Hey do you mind reviewing my two contest entries?

They are in my portfolio.

They are called, 1.Far Away... and 2. Last Chance...

Thanks!

KJR
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Can you review my romance ficton please?
viewtopic.php?t=82625

or my fantasy?
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One word to say to you
One world to live onto
One person that makes you spin
One song you'll always sing
Show me the way <3



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