I'm on a strict all review diet!

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What genres I like to review: Romantic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Art.

What genre I don't mind reviewing: Any of the Poetry as well as Scripts, Lyrics, and Miscellaneous.

What genres I don't like to review: Action/Adventure and Non-Fiction. (And even then I'll make exceptions.)

Also, rating and such are no issue for me along the lines of swearing but explicitly sexual content is probably going to be a no no.

As a rule, I don't like to review chapters unless it's a first or if it includes a summary at the beginning so keep that in mind too please.

How I Review:
Generally, if the nitpicks of a story haven’t been picked out already, I’ll go through and find any grammar or style errors that I catch. After that, I’ll focus on certain things that need to be worked on in the story or aspects of it that really outshined the rest then give an overall view. This goes for poetry as well. My reviews differ slightly though depending on whether it’s prose, poetry, art, or other.


Now, go ahead, ask away!!!
Last edited by lilymoore on Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:09 am, edited 4 times in total.
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A poetry review, please? :) post814630.html

I'm struggling with the ending slightly, so any thoughts on that would be great. Obviously anything you can say about it is wonderful and useful.

Thanks!
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*licks fingers clean of Aqua and ketchup*

Anyone else?
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If you have some time, could you please take a peek at this poem?
topic75547.html

Thanks so much! Really appreciate it :)
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Hi, Lily! Could you review this poem for me? topic75504.html

Thanks much. :)

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Finger-lickin good!
But who will be my next victim?
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H'okay, before I request, I have a question. Do you mind reviewing something with loads of reviews already? xD If so, I'll gradually fade into the distance...
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Can you review my photos?
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Hello!

Would you mind reviewing my poem, A Kiss That Means Nothing (Who needs love, anyway...)
It has chocolate in it :D
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






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hey, lily can you review a piece of work for a YWS contest? thanks.

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Hey, Lily!
If you wouldn't mind, I do have a beginning chapter that I would really love a review from you on.
Here's the link:
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Thank you!
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*takes the closed sign off of the door*
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:D Please?

THANKSSOMUCHYOUAREAMAZING! :D
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or maybe like pocket candy
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If you've got the time, I would love a review on this

Please and thank you!

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Donesies!
Who's next?
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