I'm on a strict all review diet!

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KatTrain
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:02 am
KatTrain says... · Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:02 am
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With sugar on top?! :]
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....




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FRAYEDjade
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Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:10 pm
FRAYEDjade says... · Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:10 pm
It would be great if you could review this for me..
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Thanks!
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lilymoore
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Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:12 am
lilymoore says... · Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:12 am
Donesies! Anyone else?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.




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Sierra
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Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:29 am
Sierra says... · Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:29 am
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Will you please review this for me? I'm thinking of submitting it in a contest, and I want it to be win-material.
What a shame,
We used to be such fragile broken things.




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cupcake
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Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:02 am
cupcake says... · Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:02 am
If you have time can you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic82977.html
Thank you in advance!!!
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Kagi
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Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:25 pm
Kagi says... · Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:25 pm
Hai ily rawr XD

Wanna take a crack at this?
Got YWS?

If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P




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HostofHorus
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:51 pm
HostofHorus says... · Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:51 pm
Lilly! Can you review my poem? It's not too good but whatever, tear it up. post881012.html#p881012
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)




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ZannaShepherd
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:39 pm
ZannaShepherd says... · Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:39 pm
Hi,
I have a couple pieces with only 1 or 2 comments on them that I'd love another opinion on, and I'd really appreciate it if you'd review them.
Thanks!

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In order to write about life, first you must live it!

Ernest Hemingway

Hmm, must be why I only write fantasy, that's the only life I've ever lived.
~Zanna




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Boolovesyou
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Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:04 pm
Boolovesyou says... · Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:04 pm
Please review this short poem for me!

topic83869.html

Thanks!
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I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy