I'm on a strict all review diet!

lilymoore · 2011-01-28T15:56:10Z

What genres I like to review: Romantic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Art. What genre I don't mind reviewing: Any of the Poetry as well as Scripts, Lyrics, and Miscellaneous. What genres I don't like to review: Action/Adventure and Non-Fiction. (And even then I'll make exceptions.) Also, rating and such are no issue for me along the lines of swearing but explicitly sexual content is probably going to be a no no. As a rule, I don't like to review chapters unless it's a first or if it includes a summary at the beginning so keep that in mind too please. How I Review: Generally, if the nitpicks of a story haven’t been picked out already, I’ll go through and find any grammar or style errors that I catch. After that, I’ll focus on certain things that need to be worked on in the story or aspects of it that really outshined the rest then give an overall view. This goes for poetry as well. My reviews differ slightly though depending on whether it’s prose, poetry, art, or other. Now, go ahead, ask away!!!

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Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:19 pm

MiaParamore says... · Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:19 pm

Hey there, Lily!

I would surely love a review on my novel-Turning the Tables. But I am not very keen on getting reviews for the first and second part, so it would be great if you could get the third part critiqued. But I guess you'll have to read the other parts so that you don't get confused. If you don't wanna, it's up to you, and you could ask me to PM you the Story So Far tilll part -two..

Okay, I'll stop now. Thanks in advance!

~Shrubs

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I'll point you to the mirror"

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Fri Mar 04, 2011 7:20 pm

Nephthys says... · Fri Mar 04, 2011 7:20 pm

Hi, I would love if you could review my script Freya's Replacement. I have just massively edited it, and have not received any reviews on the edited version yet. If it's too long, I understand if you don't want to review it (it's about 8000 words). You could also just read parts 1-5 and then actually review parts 6-8. Again, I understand if it's too long.

Thanks

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Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:03 pm

Button says... · Sat Mar 05, 2011 12:03 pm

Rawwwwwwwwwr.
Hey there, lily. Could you please take a quick look at this?
I would be extraordinarily grateful. ^^
Thanks!

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Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:54 am

lilymoore says... · Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:54 am

Woot Woot!
Done Done!
Who be next brudder maan? *is feelin' stereotypically Jamaican*

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Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:16 pm

Sins says... · Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:16 pm

Yo. Lily. Yo.

Would you be ever so kind and review the beginning of my romance novel for me, please? Here's da link, bruv: post829187.html#p829187

It's a bit... mehish, but hey, that's what reviewers are here to fix, eh? Please and thank you!

I didn't know what to put here so I put this.

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Tue Mar 08, 2011 3:49 pm

rememberdecember says... · Tue Mar 08, 2011 3:49 pm

if u have the time can you review some of my poetry on my blog...i dont know how to post a link, sorry

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Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:25 pm

XxMattxX says... · Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:25 pm

Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
topic77210.html
Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
-Jojo

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Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:46 am

lilymoore says... · Thu Mar 10, 2011 1:46 am

Anyone else?
Hmm!

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Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:43 pm

lilymoore says... · Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:43 pm

*bumps shamelessly then skulks off to actually look for something to review*

Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.

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Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:39 pm

lilymoore says... · Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:39 pm

*wipes the cobwebs off of the thread*

I don't bite, promise!

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:57 am

itsjustemilie says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:57 am

topic79247.html
A review on my poem would be handy, if your up for it (:

ItJustEmilie!

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:27 pm

lilymoore says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:27 pm

Doneskies!

Gimmie More! Please!!!!

*drools for something else to review*

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:40 pm

Tigersprite says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 4:40 pm

Can you please review this? It's a fantasy novel chapter. Thanks in advance!

Tiger

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:23 pm

Bivrax says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:23 pm

Hey, this is my first major story on here. I worked super hard! Please review it! Thanks!

post847293.html#p847293

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Thu Apr 14, 2011 5:13 am

KnightlyAngel09 says... · Thu Apr 14, 2011 5:13 am

Hi Lily!:)

If you don't mind and if you've got time, please take a look at this:
topic79253.html

I'm still really shaky on free verse so I'll need all the help I can get.

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