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theboss
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Tigersprite
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Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:25 pm
Tigersprite says... · Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:25 pm
Done Skins! Getting to yours boss! (Yours boss...haha :P)
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Vampyre
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:21 am
Vampyre says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:21 am
Hey Tiger!

So, I was wondering if you could please review my poem, Photograph to Sand?
There is a rather long spoiler I'm afraid, but it's quite important that one reads it so that one will understand, even just a little...

I don't mind harsh critiques ordinarily, but this one...well, you'll see in the spoiler. Don't feel you have to pussyfoot around, but please don't be too harsh on the content.

Thanks in advance,
'Pyre.

Oh, and the link and a small sample's in my signature :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades






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Tigersprite
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:44 pm
Tigersprite says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 6:44 pm
Done all except Vampyre. I'll try and get to yours now.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
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Tigersprite
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Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:55 pm
Tigersprite says... · Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:55 pm
Done Vampyre! Amazing poem, by the way.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
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canislupis
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Sat Dec 25, 2010 11:29 am
canislupis says... · Sat Dec 25, 2010 11:29 am
Hi Tiger! If/When you have time, I'm looking for opinions on my (brilliantly titled :roll:) piece:

Titleless Possible 3-Pronged Contest Entry

Thanks! I'd really appreciate it. :D I don't really like it (that's an understatement) so I'd like to edit as much as possible before the deadline (31st). Anything you have to say would be great.




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Tigersprite
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Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:24 pm
Tigersprite says... · Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:24 pm
Done Canis! Anyone else?
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
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Button
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Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:33 pm
Button says... · Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:33 pm
Your avvie kind of scares me. It's pretty fierce. And awesome.

ANYWAYS-
if you have some time, could you please take a look at this?
topic73814.html

Thanks :D

-Coral-




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StoryWeaver13
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Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:53 pm
StoryWeaver13 says... · Mon Dec 27, 2010 11:53 pm
Would you review the first chapter of my novel 13? I'm all for a harsh review if you so desire. :D
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psudiname
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Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:38 am
psudiname says... · Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:38 am
only three chapters eh? that sounds perfect. could you perhaps review my first three action-adventure novel chapters?
the name is Caleb's story, here are the links:
topic73681.html
topic73742.html
topic73817.html
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.




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Tigersprite
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Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:15 pm
Tigersprite says... · Tue Dec 28, 2010 9:15 pm
Done Weaver! Getting to the rest tomorrow!
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
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Tigersprite
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:41 am
Tigersprite says... · Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:41 am
Done Sephy! Now just yours Psudiname.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
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ToritheMonster
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:49 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:49 pm
I'd greatly appreciate it if you could take a look at my poem.

topic74010.html

Thanks!
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Tigersprite
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:21 pm
Tigersprite says... · Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:21 pm
Done Dreamy!
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do."
Nathan Leopold




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Shearwater
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Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:08 pm
Shearwater says... · Fri Dec 31, 2010 7:08 pm
Hey Sprite! Can you review this for me?
topic74049.html
It's the beginning of another novel, slightly...I think. Who knows how far I'll get this time. :3
Thanks a bunch.
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