"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
If you could please review this, it's a fantasy short story called No Forgiveness
I'd really appreciate it 'Pyre
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed Made soft with all her razor blades, That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked. As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Done Pyre! Jashy, yours shall most certainly be done tomorrow.
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.
Hey, if you have time will you review this: http://http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=72883 I really want to improve it but I've only had one comment on it so far, so even if it's just to say what you think of it... molto apprezzato
(Never mind... I can't delete this, but anyway, don't bother. thanks anyway )
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We're fools whether we dance or not, so we might as well dance.-Japanese Proverb
Done SweetMoments and emoinpink! Doing yours Sephy! PM'd you about yours, Rain!
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Would you mind reviewing something for me? It's the first chapter of a novel I rewrote. I've edited it a bit since my previous reviews, so I'd love a new opinion on it. It's a bit dodgy, but hey, I'm sure you don't mind!
"A superman ... is, on account of certain superior qualities inherent in him, exempted from the ordinary laws which govern men. He is not liable for anything he may do." Nathan Leopold
Done Rain!
