Here's a villanelle I wrote. I hate villanelles, but we had to do one for school.
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Stumble blindly into arms of His
Fear, the heart of love
Cry; God- this is all there is?
Mentioned briefly, tempers fizz
Fire for the olive tree’s dove
Stumble blindly into arms of His
Black figures tremble, faith, they quiz
Bruises not to be spoken of
Cry; God- this is all there is?
Thoughts will break up through their sieve
Behind the altar, push comes to shove
Stumble blindly into arms of His
Kiss the floor- “Stop, please, Miss.”
Giggle behind a white kid glove
Cry; God- this is all there is?
Questions, you’re told, are blasphemous
Trust only what you know’s above
Stumble blindly into arms of His
Cry; God- this is all there is?
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NOTE: This poem is NOT a bash on Christianity, as one might assume when reading it initially. I have great respect for other people's religions, even if I do not always agree with them. This poem is intended to be a message about how often, children are forced into Christianity and forced to go to Catholic schools. When they try to question things, they are yelled at, and often the nuns can be overly harsh. Some other children, raised to be completely closed-minded, might go so far as to bully those who question their ways. I realize this poem is a harsh generalization. I know that 90% of people in the Christian faith are not like this. I wrote this from my own personal experiences and my friends' personal experiences. I COMPLETELY respect other's religions. No disrespect is intended in this poem.
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