A Paladin's Acts of Kindness - My Review Thread (Open)

Hello, this is my Will Review For Food Thread, I shall warn you now I'm quite harsh so if you can't take criticism, please go elsewhere, because I don't hold back, if what you desire to be reviewed is awful I will say, but if it's good it will get glowing praise.

Now I only review poetry, and don't expect me to do them immediately, but I promise you the wait will be worth it. I'm very analytical with my reviews not going for grammar but more the nuances of said poem. If I feel it's cliché you can guarantee I will say.

I hope this is clear .

So come one come all !

Hey there! Would you please review this poem for me? Thanks in advance!

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Hello, please review this for me, topic70455.html
If theres spelling mistakes its because I still can't find my spell cheak button...

Done and done!

Now send me more, remember only poems!

Will you review this? topic72330.html

Flower~Child wrote:Will you review this? topic72330.html

Done!

Anymore reviews people want me to do? Remember I'll only do poems and will give you a good thorough review .

Here's another one if you don't mind.

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Please review my poem- The Battle For Happiness
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would you please review my poem Mask? viewtopic.php?t=70962
thanks
Pointe

p.s. please PM me when your done

Finally done every single one . Give me more!

Hope they helped.

I heard you're a really good reviewer, and though this work of mine is pretty old I would appreciate a harsh review on it. I hope you don't mind that it already has a few reviews; it's just that I want to start writing poems again and I've found a harsh review motivates me most. This is it, The Wisdom of Mr Fox. Thanks in advance.

Tiger

is lyrics okay? Ummm... topic72931.html it's kind of poetry anyway? O_o light poetry hahaha

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