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AT YOUR SERVICE!!!!!


So after a long hiatus, I am opeingin ym reviewing thread once again and would be glad to help you out. Well, I have five stars 8) and my reviews are pretty lengthy so you can trust me with your work.

All I need is a link to your piece. I don't mind any genre and also I will review 16+ work, as I have come to know that this rating has nothing obscene and it can be read by me.

Poetry?I am not sure if you should take that risk with me as I am no good at poetry and also have never attempted writing something good here. But still I won't mind reviewing it, but you might mind my review after it's posted as it's gonna be useless. :lol:

It would be my honour to help you out! And this site asks for British English, so I would be judging you with that perspective until you tell me that you use US or Australian one.

Links to some of my detailed reviews:
Let Me Love You
bridge over Paradise
There are many. I would upload thme later.

Hoping to get lots of reviews. :)

~Shubhi
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No one wants a review? Please let me know. I am craving for doing a review.
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Hey, I'd like to make a request on someone else's behalf please. Here's the link: topic61466.html

Thank you. If you'd like a review in return, feel free to send me a pm.

Heather xx
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Willing to do an essay, by any chance?

post685378.html#p685378
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Kitty yours done!
Firearris: Sorry I have done half but won't continue it further. It's adult I believe.
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Heya :)

Could you review this please, if you have the time?
It's pretty short.

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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Skins the review is done. :D Keep writing! You are doing a good job!
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topic61758.html?uid=14728


this, please?
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Link; topic61809.html

Could you please review this peice of work, and be as tough as possible! :)
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Please review my vampire story It titled 'In the Company of a Vampire'. I would provide a link but I'm too lazy to that so just go to my portfolio.
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It will be done by Wednesday i guess.
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Dreamy115 done! Heading towards rest of your works.
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Curiousvampire done, will get to yours Apple tomorrow.
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Any more???
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Hey again :)

I'm not sure if you'll be willing to do this, but I may as well ask :wink:
Could you review my novella? It's literally only 20 something pages long, so it's pretty short.
If you don't want to do it, that's fine! I was just wondering.

The Beauty In Ugly

Thanks!

xoxo Skins
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