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Hello everyone!

March is National Peanut Month! So come get your share of Peanut!

I review anything and everything :D

Just so you know what type of review you're looking at, I specialize in;

~Grammar
~Plot and character development
~Word choice and sentence structure
~Detecting unneeded cliches
~Honest and truthful critiques


Here is an example of one of my reviews for your reference!

Drop me a line, and I'll get to you within twenty-four hours! :D

P.S. I work for free! ;)

~Peanut

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Reviews Completed~

Hemlock by lilymoore

The Assassin’s Redemption by KanenRenoir

Finding me back- prologue by shubhiloves2write

Shades of Violet by Valentine

Balema, A World of Many Elements-Chapter 1 by Durriedog

4 minutes by Dreamy115

The Robyn Academy by bubblegum

Survive: Chapter One- Genesis by RayquazaKid

Yours Truly by BenFranks

A Criminal's Heart by shubhiloves2write

TimeKeeper by captain.classy
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Well, since no body has asked you for a review yet, I will!!

Hemlock

Just a general review would do though! Pwease and tanks you!
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Finite!

Bring on some more! :D
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Hey, I was wondering if you'd check out my fantasy novel, The Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. i have ch.1 pt. 1 and 2 post and ch.2 pt 1. You don't have to look at them all, just the first part. Here's a link to the first one. If you can find the time:
topic58817.html

Thanks.
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Finished! :D

More, please! :smt003 You know you want to ;)
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hey can you review this from Historical Fiction. Please also go though Chapter-1 as many haven't.
Finding me back- prologue
Finding me back-Chapter 1


And let me know if I can review something for you.
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I finished the prologue yesterday, sorry I haven't gotten to the first chapter today. I've been very busy lately.. again, I apologize. I'll get to it shortly :)

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Please review my story, Shades of Violet. It's pretty cool. I hope you enjoy it. :

topic60103.html

Thanks so much!
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Finished with yours, Valentine! I loved it ;)

Sorry Shubhi, but your Chapter 1 is a locked topic. I can't review it. I'm sorry D=

Anyone else want a peanut? =D
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Mememe, Peanut! I want one of your lurverly reviews!

Be warned that it is long, so sorry. Genre: Fantasy Fiction, First Chapter. Don't worry, I won't chase you down and set the hounds of hell on you if you don't follow it! Heck, I'll even hide it from you O.o no-more-than-the-first-chapteraphobia!

topic60211.html

Thanks!
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I must say, peanuts are my favorite nut....

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thankee kindly.
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Finished!

Next? =D
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Do you want to review my story? It's fantasy fiction.
Well, not the whole story. Chapter one, part one.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60214.html
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Just finished with your story, bubblegum (:
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Hi peanut. Can you review this for me?

Survive Chaper One
Call me RK :)



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