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Rose,

Rose moved to level 46 bringing her staff around expecting enemies. But none came, this is very weirdse she thought. She crept further forward, into more trees and found herself in a clearing. An enemie lept from the trees, slicing one to block her path. "Damn!" She said quietly. She raised her staff and swept the monster off its feet sending it flying into the air. She heard a grunt behind her. She spun around preparing to face more enemies. There were six of them and they all advanced at once. She panicked and backed away a little, then raised her staff and in one fluid motion send fire towards the monsters. The burned croaking out their last cries. She smiled, but she was tired after the effort of using magic. She climbed into a tree and held the gem at the end of her staff, she felt her life bar refilling slowly, but she would have to stay in the tree for a while.

*Peri*

He rubbed his head and fixed his hair. Okay, so being short was bad enough, but just to add insult to injury he just got stepped on. Literally, stepped on.

'Ouch!' He moaned and whacked her foot with his sword, which did 2 damage. Based on that, he guessed her level to be at least 50. 'What did I do to you?'

'I'm so sorry. I didn't see you. No need to say my name, it's floating above my head... Do you need healing?' He shook his head.

'I lost my team.' He said with a childish pout and looked at the entrance of the cave. Healers where pretty much useless without a team, and you can't really level up at a decent rate using kamikazi attacks. He noticed her amused glance at the sword he'd just hit her with. 'I'm not a newb!'

'All newbs say that.' To make a point he used the most advanced healing spell he had to restore the 2 damage he'd already done. 'Why do you have a newb weapon?'

'I kind of like it.' He looked at the dim shine of the sword. 'I can hit people with it when they stand on me.'

Eden

Level thirty-five, finally! I jump into the air in satisfaction, feeling a wave of energy through my bones. This is because I have just learned the ability to command woodland creatures to my bidding. I look out of the corner of my eye and see a beetle, much larger then avarage, crawl to my side. He's not very powerful right now, but as I advance through the levels, he will grow stronger and I will be able to command more creatures.

I whistle for him to follow. Now I'll figure that I will head back to town and get another quest. Then I will take a break and please my mother. However, I run into two people in a minor scramble, something having to do with newbs.

"Guys, is everything alright?" I ask, with a slight edge of worry in my voice.

*Luna*

" Guys, is everything alright?" I glanced over to see a level thirtyfive walk up to us. I picked up the little man, Peri, and put him on my head.
" Hey, let me down from here," he protested. I shook my head and felt as he held on by a few strands.
" Why don't you jump?" He gasped and I laughed again before placing him on the ground," I'm just joking with 'cha." He whacked my foot again," Ow!" Peri looked up at the girl that just approached.
" Everything's fine, I'm just being tortured is all." I smiled," My name's Peri." Eden laughed and kneeled down.
" I can tell," she glanced over at the dungeon," are you guys going in there?" I picked up Peri and set him on the tip of my claws. It was so fun messing with him.
" Well, I was, but someone," I threw Peri in the air," inturrpted me." Eden got all wide-eyed.
" You can solo a Level 45 dungeon?" I shrugged.
" I guess, wanna come?"

I was trying to think of a way to bring everyone together and I came up with an idea but I just want to know what you guys think.
So anyway I was thinking that their should be guilds, like any game. And anway we should all join the one guild which is searching for an aretfact that is supposedly has the power to bring the game to life and destory earth with it's data corruption. Though it is thought to to be a myth becuase it is the strongest object in the game.
And then there is another guild who are also trying to get the artefact but to use it to take over Earth and send it into an eclispe.
So I know maybe I should've placed this up first but I didn't! So I guess if you like the idea you have to choose between the evil and good guilds.

Look at spoilers for more information!

Eclipse Hunters Guild

Spoiler

This is the good guild. Their leader Olaf is thought of a shady character who leaves all the dirty work to the rest of the small guild. Olaf is also thought to be a cheat for his arm is completely metal something that no one in the game can get without altering the game data.

Minotuar's Guild

Spoiler

The leader, Calbb, is a minotuar and also the last one of his race. Haveing to scrtaches down his face he is caught in the game unable to enter into real life withot finding the Eclispe bracelet. Using his henchmen (guild members) he tries to track down the bracelet for world domination of Earth and freedom

Eclipse Bracelet

Spoiler

Forged by the last strands of ancient magic, the eclipse bracelet has the ability to corrupt data and destory real life places in the matter of minutes, if in the wrong hands.

If you like it great because I need to know what guild you are in!!!

<<Changing to 1st person writing, 3rd is just bugging me at the moment >>

Rose,

I had finished healing but I realised that I wasn't going to be able to make it through here on my own. I made it out of the level and back into town. I saw a bunch of people one with a small kid on their head.

"Hey!" I called running over to them. "Are you about to do level 46?"

"No," said the one with the holding the kid above her head. "But we are about to do level 45, if you want to tag along for th experience." I nodded, she grinned. "This should be easy!" She set the little guy on his feet.

"Peri," he said in answer to my questioning look.

"And I'm Luna" she smiled at me. I nodded.

"I'm Eden." The other girl who hadn't spoken yet held out her hand.

"Rose. Shall we go kick some monster butt?"

Kimber~

I stumbled to my feet staring at the digital world around me. This was my first time playing "The World". The cobble stoned area around me sparkled in the sun's light, other players lounged on the cross bridged. The white fluffy clouds roamed across the sky slowly hiding some of the sun's light. Getting to my feet I stared at my gloved hands and giggled, feeling at the texture with my fingers. I could hear voices booming around me, laughing, squabbling and talking...this is just what everyone had said the game was. Walking forward I waddled towards the slate draw bridge, birds were perched on the rope holding the wooden planks of the railing together. Heads turned around to stare at me as I passsed them a little to eagerly, jumping and flaying my hands with every step.
Stopping at the side of the draw bridge, I stared down at the glimmering water basking in the light of the sun. The warm rays hit my neck sending tingles down my spine.
"Hey" I heard a snide voice say behind me "Look at this newb" I froze suddenly my heart racing. My friend had warned me not to come to the city, she had said people didn't take to kindly to newbs.
"Look at her, she thinks we are adressing someone else" a deeper voice sounded to my left side, mock coaxed the words making me bite into my lip.
"I mean who wears cloth with those type of weapons!"
I could feel eyes boring into my back. Shouldering myself up I began to walk slowly off hoping that they weren't talking to me.
"Hey where are you going!?" I felt a meaty hand clamp down around my wrist pulling me back.
"I need a bit more XP to level and killing a newb might be perfect" A boy with a silver helmet covering his head spat at me. The smell of fish rheeking from his breath. I kicked forward striking his shin, turning I squealed before bounding over the drawbridge my breath shakey as I lurched past a group of laughing high levels.
"Hey come back!" I heard one of them scream. Ignoring them I ran through the crowd, jumping over a drunk sprawled messily in the middle of the cobbled stone road.
"We aren't finished with you!" Their voices shook in my ears as I ploughed through resitant people.
"Can't run forever, level 1!"

<< I like the guild idea, it gives us a plot to work too I'll be happy to go along with it, sorry about the previous post, I wrote it at about the same time as yours I think so I didn't see your post Daisy.>>

It's okay!!! And so what guild are you with?

Kaye~

I stared at Calbb from the corner of my eye. The jewels he wore from his horns ornamented down his gaunt face. The two large scracthed across his left eye, were turning red as the light splashed upon them. I frowned down at my boots as my tail plumed around me touching at the swords at my waist.
"Are we just going to sit here!" I barked through gritted teeth, I saw the expression on Calbb's face change into a dark anger. I saw the other henchmen around him turn to stare at me questiongly, fear marred their features.
"Silence girl, you may be my top dog but you still have to keep that tongue back" Calbb roared throwing himself out of his golden throne. The light coming from the whole in the plastered roof glinted on his ornaments. The large deep green cloak he wore fluttered around him making his already huge figure look even larger.
I blinked at him bored smirking "Child!" I gawked "I am not a mere child!" Being level 76 I was higher than most other characters, this included the others of my guild excpet for Calbb.
"You speak so freely, i someone was to cut out yur tongue you would be rendered mute" He laughed pushing imself back down into his throne "And than we would get some peace and quiet"
Pushing myself forward I felt the top of my horns "Calbb I want to do something this is boring!"
"Then go kill some newb's, no one is stopping you" He fluttered his hand towards the door looking away from me. Turning on my heel, I stormed out puling my blades out from their hilts.
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Tyson~

I struck the floor underneath me ignoring the pain in my side. The vined monster stagered back, petals faling lifelessly from its stems. The top half off its body slid off the bototm half striking the floor with a heavy thud. I pulled my self back flexing my fingers. Placing my blade back on my back I walked into the middle of the plain striding next to the beetles net to me.
Staring at the castle in the far off distance, I closed my eyes thinking of the familiar smells and sounds. Opening my eyes I stared around at the drawbidge.
"Hey mate where did you learn to teleport!" I heard a heavy voiced accent behind me.

<< I'll be with the eclipse hunters guild, can I suggest making a disscussion forum for this storybook >>

Sakura
Yes, she was awfully tied, but she just couldn't stop. Killing monsters was now her hobby, it really did entertain her, in the sickest of ways of course. So Sakura continued running until from where she was, she saw a bunch of fighter and other players gather.
"Yeah, I should go there" She thought aloud. It was ok to socialize sometimes, even when it mean that she had to share the monsters with others.
Well, again, she started running, it seemed as if she had been running a lot lately. As she was going downhill, she started gaining up speed by the second. As hard as she tried to stop before hitting someone, she just couldn't.
"Ouch" She heard an angry voice say when she landed on them.

"I'm sorry, I'm so sorry" Sakura apologized, talking as fast as ever for she was too excited to even think.

"It's ok" A girl said.

"I'm Sakura," She said. "And I'm so very sorry"

"I'm Rose," The girl said. " And this is Eden, Peri and Luna" Rose introduced.

(I'll be in the Eclipse Guild)

Eden

I smile, brushing my hair out my eyes. I'm still trying to get used to how real everything seems in here!
"Of course," I say, bringing my bow and arrow to my chest. However, I realize that this is the first dungeon I have been in since the tutorial one when I first joined. And that is for one reason. The reason I have been leveling so slowly.
"Just a question," I say loudly, "What happens if you die in this game?"

(Feel free to correct me if this doesn't work.)

*Peri*

'What happens if you die?' Peri repeated the question. 'I could show you if I had a volunteer?' He glanced around. 'Never mind. If you die you get a funny little number above your head, counting from ten to zero. If nobody revives you before you hit zero, you loose a level and get sent to a respawn point. The greater the overkill, the faster the numbers go down.'

He got up to his feet and carefully took Sakura's hand. She seemed to pull back a little, but he tugged at her sleeve to put his hand on her wrist and cast a light healing spell.

'Thanks, you didn't need to. Are you guys going into the dungeon? Can I come?' She said, the excitement sparking in her eyes.

'Sure. With this many of us we could try getting through the secret door.' Luna agreed.

'Secret door?'

'Apparently there's a secret door, and behind it we'll find a scroll with a clue to how to get the most powerful weapon in the game.'

'What's that?' Peri asked.

'It's just a rumour,' Rose said. 'But what's the harm in keeping our eyes open.'

Sakura
Now there was a bunch of people with her, she wasn't used to it but it was great. There was something different in her while being with other people, she felt as if she actually belonged.
"Let's get going then" Sakura said with a smile on her face, preparing her sword as she walked.
From behind her, she felt Peri staring at her as she looked at her sword and swung it in the air. It was relieving for her to take her sword and just enjoy the cold steel and run it softly though her hand without causing much damage.
"How good are you with that?" Peri asked her.

She looked at him with piercing eyes but a wide smile on her face. "Wanna see?" She said, challenging but he just smiled.
"NO thanks"

"So let's get moving" Rose said, interrupting their little conversation.