The Third Wizard War

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Do you want the plot listed below, or a simple, go through life plot?

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Could he have caught it in the wild? He does have magical powers you know. :? He didn't have to buy one from Diagon Alley. (Probably spelled that wrong)
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Yea and also, I'm honestly not seeing the big deal in the wand thing. It seems trivial considering that in the last book during the wizard war Harry lost his wand several times and didn't fret over it much. In fact I remember he borrowed draco's wand for a good while. It doesn't matter if the wands yours the spells you perform just may not work as well.
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Hm, but still... the back and forth wand passing.
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that's just the way it seems to me. *shrugs* But anyway I think we need to calm everyone down. We've done an awful lot of in group fighting. If this keeps up we're going no where you have to admit. =)
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(In character)

Saul sighed. "What if I lent my wand to Kale?"

"Are you sure?" Alex said uncertainly.

"I've already done ,any bad things with it... some which I can't change." He trembled remembering having killed two of the invaders at Hogwarts.
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Peter~

Peter placed his hand on Saul's shoulder. He'd finally gotten his head together. The events that had just passed had completely thrown him off track but now he was alright.

"Hold on." He jumped on top of one of the tables and faced the students. "Now look mates, It's time we get together. Screw this house crap! We've all lost something. Every single one of us. We're all scared. But the moment we start fighting each other..." Peter locked eyes with each one of them, "we're dead."

Peter allowed his words to sink in. The bar was quiet, not even Aberforth made a sound. Finally Tristen spoke.

"Then what do you expect us to do?"

Peter took a deep breath "We fight!"

"You're crazy, " Bradley Mcauthor said "How do you expect us...a bunch of kids to when against an army of Death eaters."

"Well it was a group of kids who fought Voldemort last time," Violet offered. "I guess it is possible."

There were more comments of support and disclaim amongst the students but Peter had a plan. It was crazy but something about the way Saul had escaped the school piqued his interest and also the snapping of Kale's wand. He knew what to do. They needed help.

"Guys Harry potter formed D.A-Dumbledore's Army and stopped the greatest wizard of all time well it's time we did the same. It's time we stopped looking at each other's house..."Peter tossed aside his house robes "We're gonna become H.A Hogwart's Army and take back our school!"
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to let ya'll in on what's going on. Remember how in the book the goblin's were fighting for wand rights? We should go out find the goblins and get them to join their cause. It's possible if they offered them the secret to making wands. Also the goblins were the ones who raided Hogwarts before back before Harry's time. They built the passage way on the third corridor behind the statue of the one eyed witch. So it's plausible they'd know more about the school right? That'd put the students in a total advantage.
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How do I fit in with all this? If these kids still suspect me... dear God are they going to use me as decoy? Saul shivered. His pajamas looked rather comical now. How would he look in battle wearing it? Assuming he would be included in the battle that is.
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Peter~

"I Know...I can't make you guys do this," Peter allowed his voice to drop "but all I ask is that just for once. We look past our differences. Don't do this for me, but for all the fun times we've had in our school. The competitions,the house cup,our friends, and families. Guys, this is affecting all of us." Peter directed his gaze at Kale. "We're all in this together."

He stepped down from the table top. Nobody said anything. Peter sat down. It was up to them now. Whatever they decided.
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Yeah, everybody except me. Nobody's ever included me in anything. I was no more than next a shadow to them. I was less than a ghost, for even they got attention. Nearly Headless Nick once called me, "Nearly friendless Saul" little did he know that it was true.Now the Bloody Baron.. that evil spirit loved taunting me. He even encouraged me to do the killing curse on myself.

Saul stood behind the others his heart and pulse racing.
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Wow guys. Wow. Umm the wand thing is actually importan. Each wand will only work so well for the owner. It will never function well for someone else. However if it is willingly borrowed or taken in combat it will work fine. If it is stolen it will not even perform menial tasks well. I'll post soon
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Can someone please explain to me what is going on? Some posts seem to be completely ignored, and others make only limited sense if taken in context with prior posts. If there a DT for this storybook?

Help would be much apreciated.
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Tristin~~ Gryffindor

I let Peters words flow through me without taking much in. We would talk in private. Things had evolved quickly. First the tavern, that had been unexpected, maybe more so to him than the others who knew the full story of Harry Potter. I knew my share, but being born a muggle, I hadn't been raised on it like the others. Then the Dementor. That in itself was odd. Dementors are prison guards, which means that whoever was leading this had been to Azkaban, which opened up all new possibilities. It also meant he was smarter than Voldemort had been. He struck at once, utilizing all of his assets, instead of striking at multiple times, but Aberforth knew that already. This meant nothing was safe, not even the ministry, but Aberforth also seemed to know that. Oh, and then the fight. I was glad I hadn't seen it, or even been near it; that had been an interesting conversation.

"It has all been planned for a long time. That's what no one seems to understand" Aberforth said, his voice grave, as if he already knew what was to come and had resigned himself to it.

"When did it start?"

"With the murder of Harry Potter."

"But those were muggles."

"Nope. Do you really think Harry potter, the head of the Aurors, would live in the house a muggle could see? No, they were wizards, and they made it look like it was muggles."

"Then how did no one notice. If someone as important and skilled as Harry Potter was killed, wouldn't they at least do something about it?"

"This is exactly what happened before. NO one wants to believe it could be like Voldemort. And this new guy was planning on that. He wanted people to remain ignorant of everything hes been doing until he sprang his trap, which he did tonight. It's too late now, even for the Order."

"Because its large, or fairly large, and its been done before. This guy, he did everything that Voldemort did, but better. He knows what lead to Voldemort's defeat, so he's planned for that."

"Now you're catching on."


I stood up and left the main room. There were kids from school scattered everywhere. I recognized some, but others I didn't.

I walked over to where I saw Violet sitting and sat down next to her.

"Violet, I have no problem with you, but if you ever start a fight like the one you did back in Hogsmede, I will take your wand. This isn't a time to start fights, especially with people we have no need to believe suspicious."
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Phantom: At hogsmede there was a fight. Then the Order picked us up. Now we are at the Order's hideout. Kale's wand is broken by Saul, who feels bad about it. Upon entering the hideout Kale is taken prisoner for teh mark on his arm. Peter is now delivering a speech to the many other students in the hideout. Is that good?
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Saul knew that something big was boiling in the wizarding world. Something that would affect both their world and that of the muggles.

He could still hear the snapping of the wand, permanently burned into his conscience.
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*Hey Ray, you seem to be in a different place. I thought we left the Hog's Head?? Aren't we all at the Order's hideout now? Are we all on the same page?*
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