The Third Wizard War

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Do you want the plot listed below, or a simple, go through life plot?

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Create a new storybook for the new plot and keep this one
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wow I made a thread and everybody's confused. Should we make another SB and start from here?
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Aspiring, we were in a room with Chuck, Kale and a load of Death Eaters. You apperated us into Gringots without any transition. Does that sound... I don't know, feasible to you? It was just kind of... out there. No story line, d'you see?
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We were with Kale? I thought he was taken away a long time ago,, and I didn't sense any threat from any Death eaters. I'd expect those fellows to be viscous. It sounded like regular old grumpy Wizard conversation.
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Honey, I'd stick to talking rather than posting until we sort this thing out.
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okay okay,then we should move this to the discussion thread. has everybody read my posts there?
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How bout this, I'll post from the moment Saul picked us out, and then everything will be clear. EVERYONE needs to check the DT(discussion thread). If you don't know how, just ask.

Tristin~~

I fingered my wand nervously as the Death Eaters lead us into the back room. Should I fight? Or just wait?

We entered the small room and there were five other men. Kale was sitting in a chair, looking rather shaken up, but unhurt. A man with a strikingly similar face stood above him. His brother. and then three Death Eaters. My skin crawled being near them, as if the dark magic they used was flowing out of them into me. Even though it was completely ridiculous some part of it must have been true because my headache started back up.

Kale's brother spoke, "Welcome to my Hotel." He paused, as if he wanted someone else to speak, but then he continued, "I see you know who we are, and we can't have that. Now normally we would just throw you in prison, but I see some of you are mudbloods, which makes this an even more difficult decision. Do we kill you? Or save you for the master?"

I could see Kale fighting in his mind over which side to choose. Choose victory with evil, or possible death with the friends who had acted to saved him despite his history. We needed him to choose us. None of us would curse him too badly, and if we couldn't then we were already lost. He needed to make up his mind, but it wasn't going to happen any time soon.

"And who is your master? Or where is he?" I asked, hoping that he would answer, and not just kill me where I was.

One of the Death Eaters stepped forward and pulled out his wand, but Chuck restrained him, "He has a right to know, and he is about to die anyways. It can do no harm. I will not tell you his name, but I will say he is at a certain cave, that was very important to an Idol of his. But he wont be there for long" A pause, "no he will be coming here soon. I can sense it."

Then we had less time than I thought. I looked at Peter and tried to signal my intentions. I will fight but you need to get the others out.

I waited one second and then drew my wand, blasting apart the chandelier that provided the sole illumination to the room, and then firing two stunning curses in the general direction of the Death Eaters. a muffled thump said I had hit at least one. Green and red flashes soared around the room not only from Death Eaters. The others were staying!

Amongst the chaos of the fight I saw Kale stand and ready his wand, but which side would he attack?

*Now its up to you Rory, pick a side, and then ONLY Ray should post as far as moving forward. Someone else can retell the events if they like, but Ray and I are the only people with a real grasp of what happens next, so after Rory and then Ray post and we out (with Kale or without) then we can all get back to figuring it out on our own, but right now, we need something solid to work off of.
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I wasn't posting, the italics meant that I was "talking"

Not directed to you person above me. :D
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Is this storybook officially dead? Can I end it? :D
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im very, very, sad to say so ,but yes. Make it creative.
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Hellfire yeah! :twisted: :elephant: :twisted:

I'll get to it. :P

Whoa that was cool 666 views when I clicked on this. Now it's 667. And it's now 668 for whoever is reading this. :lol:
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Something had gone terribly wrong the Gringots Bank was engulfed in flames. Trolls screamed inside, they were being cremated while still alive. Saul flinched when the others apperated beside in scattered locations. An explosion rocked Diagon Alley as a potions shop exploded.

Alex was knocked off his feet, his wand flying out of his hand.

Violet was thrown against a wall by the concussion waves. Purple and yellow smoke fumed out of the obliterated potions shop.

Saul coughed at the foulness of it.

As Alex picked himself up he gripped his stomach and hunched over, coughing perfusively.

What had happened here? Suddenly other screams mingled with the death cries of the trolls. The trolls! Why didn't he think of saving them!?

Saul turned to the fiery furnace that was Gringots and waved his wand at ii he breathed a spell and a mere sprinkle of water erupted from his wand. Where it struck the fire only sizzled. It was like spitting on a barbecue grill. Something Saul and his family had often. He hoped they were OK.

"What you doing mate!?" Alex said tugging on his robe and dragging him away from the burning building.

"We-" Saul began before black mists zoomed past him.

"DeathEaters!" Violet said.

Saul felt a shiver as his robes were whipped around by the wind being emitted by the soaring DeathEaters. How had they mastered the ability to move like the wind? Saul knew that if they stayed where they were they were dead.

Saul followed the others as they ran toward where the entrance to the muggle London. If it was till there.

Their footsteps pounded on the ground echoing throughout. Why weren't the DeathEaters giving chase?

"Yes!" Alex said when they reached the brick wall. One of the guys that Saul did not know the name of tapped the proper bricks to open it. The solid brick wall untwined in what seemed to take an eternity.

"Hurry!" Saul said, practically pushing past them as they squeezed through the narrow space into the muggle pub.

Inside people were crowed under tables and against far walls. Out in the gray London streets explosions rang out. Car alarms blared, windows shattered, but the worst was the screams.

The muggles did not seem to care that a bunch of kids had just appeared out of nowhere and were now casually walking toward the exit door. A black cloudy mist zoomed by out side the window. The temperature noticeably went down, and the glass glazed over with ice.

"Dementors!" Saul said. Suddenly three cloaked figures stopped mid flight and faced him.

"Cats your protronauses!" Violet ordered.

As the Dementors darted forward they all shouted, "Expecto Patronum!"

A polar bear erupted from Saul's wand.

An eagle from Alex's. That is what he truly wanted deep down inside. A bird only the wealthiest of Wizards could afford.

A snow leopard from Violet's.

A wolf from a nameless boy.

And a brilliant white stallion from a girls.

The Dementors stopped the moment the beautiful lights of all five Patronuses illuminated the pub and street outside. They flew off into the distance fading from sight.

The people were left gaping as Saul and the others stepped outside.

-Note to self: Continue tomorrow.
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Not happy about this. I've been checking this stupid thing every day, and we're all held up because one person is'nt posting!

I say, don't kill it officially, we just write a scene where we kill off Kale and get on with it. *Highly annoyed*

(Can you tell I have no life?)
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im all for that, but we need to get everyone together for it, and im fairly busy at the moment. If someone wants to PM everyone, then it could work out, but I cant do it.
Words - so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them. ~Nathaniel Hawthorne




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I'll do it.
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