The Saviors

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Kitrina,

"We have to help them." She cried, looking scared nonetheless.

"Do you think we can battle a whole army of them?" Zire asked.

"There's only one girl" She said.

"She's the only one visible" Zire replied, and then pointed towards the edge of the forest.

The same heat haze, but much more wider and bigger was approaching the towards them.

Kitrina gasped and then looked at the group of saviors below them. A savior was trying to take away the girl's mutation but was being held back. A another mutant was directly behind him.

The little girl, instantly drew her hand up into the air and made a grabbing movement. Small blue and silver particles began whizzing it's way to her hand, making a some sort energy sphere. As the sphere reached the size of a tennis ball, she pointed her hands towards the mutant behind the savior. Instantly, the sphere of energy, turned into a narrow beam of energy and flew it's way to the mutant. Upon reaching him, it circled around him, levitating him and dust particles around him. After about two seconds, another beam of energy flew from the sky and hit the levitating mutant, disintegrating him into wisps of air.

Kitrina fainted onto Zire blood flowing from her mouth.

*Was it overdone?* :)
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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*Fine with me*

Zire

The whole group below looked at us surprised. No one spoke, nor moved.

"Well?" I shouted "We're on your side, Behind you!"

This made them snap out of it. Kirina's energy blast was awesome, but I was not so familiar with my powers. I could only use what was in the air to use for my attacks. And in this case there was plenty of water around me. I smiled.

"Should we get down?" I asked Kitrina who was still unconscious. She barely stirred.

"I guess so" I replied to myself and then slowly slipped down the tree holding Kitrina firmly in my arms.

Once on the hard ground again, I leaned her against the truck of the tree and looked at her. She had used too much of her powers surely. She would recover soon, hopefully. I kept my hand on her forehead, no fever. Sighing in relief I peeked at what was going on with the other saviors.

They were surrounded. I did not attack yet. There was no need. I would attack only if they refused to run. After all running was their only hope now.


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*Firestalker, I specifically said that,

Can react oxygen with nitrogen into a cataclysmic energy ball against deadly foes.


So, Kitrina used the oxygen and nitrogen in the air, to create an energy blast. She didn't summon it from with in her. Okay?*

I can't post until someone writes about my character waking up. :wink:
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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Jacks-

I was still circling in the water, trying to spot my predator. I was a useless fighter but a good thinker. I just needed to get away from the enclosed area and find a group, preferably one with Saviors.

I decided to take my chances at running for it. The water splashed up against my legs and waist and I was almost to the edge of the pond when a force dropped in front of me. I looked up into the silver eyes of a mutant. I paused and examined him. It was true, they were beautiful. He was like a siren. My heart pounded against my ribs, I had absolutely no idea what to do.

Then something weird happened, everything got quiet, mute. The sound that came after almost hurt, an erruption of yells and other battle sounds. Help was close, but death was closer. I stared at the mutant in front of me. A slow, wicked smile spread across his lips. A cool hand reached out and grasped my throat. He lifted me so high out of the water that my toes barely skimmed the top.

"Help," I gasped, but it was useless. No one would hear me and I was going to die.

*anybody?*
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Kitrina,

The little girl opened her eyes. Her head was spinning and was feeling as if she was going to be sick. Wiping blood from her mouth, she stood up shakily. All around her, sounds of battle and screams came from every direction. Her vision was blurry.

She looked around, trying to see Zire, her only friend. But he wasn't anywhere near. But her eyes caught something. A young women being held by the throat, by another mutant. Knowing that she doesn't have any energy for another cataclysmic reaction, she held her hands front. This time, bluish particles began circling her little hands.

As it covered her hand, she saw the mutant noticing her. Instantly, he dropped the young women and twirled his hands around, and pointing a fist at the little girl. A silver beam shot from his fist and made it's way towards Kit.

Kit cartwheeled up into the air and pointed both her hands at the mutant in mid-air. Two bluish parallel beams of energy shot straight at the mutant. The mutant who haven't been expecting such a fast attack, dodged one ray but was hit by the other on the shoulder, knocking him onto the ground.

The young women instantly plunged her fist into the water, and pointed it at the fallen mutant. A freeze ray, froze the mutant instantly.

"Hi there, thanks for saving my life. What's your name?" The young women asked grinning at Kit.

*Okay?*
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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Zire

I was alone now and preferred it. But knowing that it was better to be with a group I kept watching Kitrina and her new friend instead of watching the larger group in front of me. She had indeed mastered her powers well. Whilst she could preform unthinkable things with her power I could only do a fraction of that. But I too had studied my powers, enabling me to do things she could not do either.

I turned back to resume watching the larger group only to be face to face with an extremely beautiful, yet bloodthirsty mutant. She caught me from my neck before I could do anything and threw me towards the large group that I had been watching, or so I though for what broke my landing was another Savior, or a mutant. Before I could recover from my throbbing head and stand up, the mutant was already on top of me.

I took a deep breath, the only thing I could do then and then breathed at the mutant. This would not have done any damage if I had not forced hydrogen, carbon dioxide, oxygen and nitrogen to form together the highly inflammable nitroglycerin.

The moment it exited my mouth as a semi vapor, it ignited, almost burning me in the process but luckily harming the mutant above me, giving me enough time to get up and run, or fight.

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*Nice one Firestalker*

Kitrina,

"I'm Kitrina, you are a savior aren't you?" The little girl asked nervously, fearing that this women was also a mutant in disguise.

"Yeah. Scared I'm one of them?" She asked, grinning.

Kitrina blushed at her idiocy.

"Shouldn't we help them?" Kitrina asked, still blushing, pointing at the group of saviors.

"We should. Two women against a group of mutants? They don't stand a chance. Let's rock." She declared and waved her hand towards the water behind her, and the water rose up. She then, pointed at her feet, and the water turned to ice under her. She started sliding towards the battle on her path of ice.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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Burns,

I land with a bone crunching thud. I am immediately back on my feet, but the world spins around me, and I collapse again. I squeeze my eyes shut, and shake my head. After a few minutes, I can finally get a hold on the outside world. I get up slowly, and call Shay. She bounds up to me. I hear the battle raging all around me, but, as I'm blind, I can't see anything. Good thing I'm used to this. I know that there's a mutant close, probably fighting. And then, it's crystal clear: the mutant is holding that girl, who thought that I was strange, but the throat.

"Shay, attack!" I yell. Shay flies forward, knocking the mutant off of its feet. I pull out my handgun, and put a round into the mutant's skull. I hold out my hand to the gasping girl.

"I'm sorry, but this is no place to rest." I say, hoisting her up.
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*I'm confused, what just happened?*
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>>>With who? Burns was thrown by a mutant, and started fighting again. Everyone else is fighting, far as I can tell.<<<
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
~Snape, AVPM

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Ahhh! My computer stuffed up! It showed zero new posts! I'm very sad now. Missed a big fight . . .

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Mire

Mire sat up and shook his head. The world appeared blurier than usual. He wryly noted he could smell alright - the smell of burnt skin and natural materials filled his nose and he hopped up in alarm. Burnt flesh?

Blinking rapidly he tried to anylyse the situation. A few Saviors were littered around him, behind him, and his head throbbed horribly. There were mutant growls and screams of pain. Mire could only deduce two things. There had been a mutant attack and somehow he had been knocked out.

The smell of burnt flesh appeared to be the closest and Mire began to sprint towards it. He saw one of the Saviors he had briefly met before and called out, "Hey, what happened?"

Just as he got about one metre away from the other Savior a mutant, hidden in the bushes, caught his leg. Mire thudded to the floor and began kicking like crazy. One of the wild kicks collided with the mutants head momentarily giving it a concussion. Mire laughed, more of a cackle and turned upon the mutant, drawing his accupuncture needles.

He leaped upon it and stabbed one of them directly through the top of its head. The mutant went limp under his grip. Slipping the needle out of the head he once again sprinted for the others.

"Hey, did I miss the party?" He asked with a mad grin.
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the mutant is holding that girl, who thought that I was strange, but the throat.

I thought Kit and Jacks already defeated that mutant. Or was it another?

Kitrina,

She looked at the women who was now sliding on ice towards the battle with surprise. But the surprise went away when she saw that the last mutant was directly behind Zire. She forgot everything else.

Sprinting forward, she jumped into the air, and then somersaulted. As she turned front againt, she pointed her hands behind and reacted Nitrogen to burn backwards, propelling her forward. As she neared the mutant, she began to turn in air, appearing more like a horizontal tornado.

Near the mutant, she suddenly pointed her hands at the mutant. In her circling motion, a spiral of bluish flames erupted out of her hands, and made a beeline towards the mutant. Upon contact, it burnt a hole through his back and came out of his chest, instantly killing him.

Kitrina fell onto the ground, weak, faintish and feeling as if she was about to throw up. Shaking, she propped herself up by her hands, and vomited all over the ground, before fainting yet again.
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
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It was a different mutant...
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
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Hey, so I just read through of all of this and really liked it. I was wondering though, if I could somehow be a human who was injected with a mutant canine gene and so I'm all weird and freaky and people obviously won't like me at first and conflicts and such can happen. Is that good with everyone? And if it is, I'll post my profile ASAp.
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*Silver, your idea is okay with me but as you've obviously seen, I'm certainly not the creator of this storybook so you could either PM RedBird or you could wait for him/her (Yup, I still don't know his/her gender o.O I'm guessing he's a he though) to reply to this storybook*

**Yeah, Thanks RedBird, now I get it**

Zire

Kitrina had done the dirt work for me. I was thankful for that. I wanted to thank her, or at least get to her and help her but I knew that leaving her the way she was, unconscious was the best thing to do. If I or anyone else went near her a mutant would surely attack. This meant that she would be in harms way too.

I knew this very well and still I wanted to check if she was all right. She may have mastered her powers but she certainly needed to pay a large price for it. She still lay on the ground. As I was in a crouching position no mutant attacked me, yet. The others were fighting and killing the mutants. I hated fighting, I would have run for it then and there if Kitrina was not unconscious, I needed to make sure she was safe. It was the least I could do to repay her. And then I would run off.

Right now all I wanted to do was get the fighting over with. It seemed as though this was the last mutant wave. So I decided I would go around, burning as much mutants as possible while they were fighting with someone else so that the saviors would have an easier time defeating them. Then I would care for Kitrina. Then, if my work was done, I would run away.


*Sorry for the pessimistic post. I'm depressed. :( :( :( *
*Okay? everyone? and C?*
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