Reviews by Carlito :)

The wait won't be long now. The term is over and I'm on break!

Romantic fiction: Let Me Love You

this is chapter 12

Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.

link: topic54963.html

Please review thanks,
Tiffany

Finished!

Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2!

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
topic55391.html

I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.

To Be Confirmed...
Please! And I also need a title (a proper one) so any ideas for that would be much appriciated. Thank you!

Hey there, Carlito(adorable name, by the way).

So I want a review and you might be able to help me out, I guess. So here's the link and try to be harsh. But only to the extent my heart could bear.

Link: The Road Not Taken-Chapter-1

Thanks in advance!

Finished Caligraphy's from the other thread that needs to be locked.

Rebz and Shubhi I'll get to you asap!

Done with both of yours!

Who is next?

Hey,
You review chapter 12 of my romantic novel Let Me Love You
The synopsis then was: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.


Well Now I have chapter 20 up and it is the ending. What has happened to this point is that you tol gary she was pregnant adn they found out they were going to be parents to twins, but one of the twins has a heart problem and they don't know if she will make it.

Here is the link: post771854.html#p771854

Please review it
Thanks and have a good day,
Tiffany

Done!

I have a poem. topic70588.html

All done

Hello, Carlito! I have a new romantic short story (kind of like a letter that is not expected to be read): topic76229.html

It would be great to get some reviews on it! Take your time.
And thank you in advance!

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