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Here, if you could please review Into the Depths Chapter II, please?

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Finished Rose!

Sorry it took so long. Someone thought it'd be a great idea to take a bunch of AP classes this year. :)


I'm still excepting reviews though!

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Hey, I know you said you won't review fantasy, but you said you'd review something of mine since i entered the contest. I'd really love you to review Wrath of A Grecian Moon, by me, and it has a pretty deep love sub-plot line. But if you want me to choose another I will! :)
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Finished Silversun :)
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Review my prologue please? :)

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Finished Smiley :D
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Please review my first chapter of my novel. I;m sending it off this week and would love to get it perfect. I'd so appreciate it if you could find the time.
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Hey, would you be able to possibly review my item? It would be really appreciated. I know you said you don't know much about poems because it wasn't one of the specified topics, but I'm sure you'll be able to. Well here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=53118
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Finished Anzius and Reida! :D

Khe Sahn, I'll try to do yours tomorrow.
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Fini Khe Sahn! :D
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Hey!!

Well, this is a poem actually, so I understand if you don't want to read it.
It's called Nothing Compares to you"

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Finished pudin :D
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Hello, I was wondering if you could review my short story Principle Mackenzie.
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It's rated a mild R, if that matters. For language and themes(?)
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Sorry for the wait, but it's done now! :D
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