Young Writers Society

John

I woke up lying oh a metal table face down the metal was cold and I half transformed so my nose was more like a muzzel and my ears were better plus I had fur which made me warm. I turned my head to see Dr Barrick hitting David before giving David his shots, David quickly dozed of Barrick should of caught him as he fell off the table but he didn't. David hit his head he was gonna feel that when he woke up.

"hey Doc" I said and the docter ingnorred me.

"come on you speak to David or is that only for the naught animal hybrids" I said finishing with a baby voice.

"David talks to me you insult me" Doc said raki g off his gloves and coming to take my restraints off.

"well that's bullshit he insult you too" I said as one hand got free.

"true but I have nothing to bitch to you you don't try to escape as much only once twice every week." Doc said as he in did my leg restreaints when he got to the next one and undid it I spoke.

"I'm thinking of upping my attempts" I said before Doc could register what I meant I kicked him in the face e and spun out of my seat I put my hand over his mouth so he couldn't shout for help. Then I punched him in the face and stabbed him with one of the full sryinges he droped like a rock not use to the sedative.

"it grows on you" I said to him taking his taser and his acsess card. When I opened the door I shot the guard on the right with the taser and quickly hit the other guard over the head with the taser. I took the two guards taser as reloaded the one I alredy had. I looked back at David.

"sorry mate but your useless at the moment and I'll probably not escape anyway" then I remebered the fence and grabed a thick pair of rubber gloves. Then I started to run. I shot two guard with the taser as I ran down the hallway people noticed me from the gym but were cheered out. I shot the guard at the door and slipped out his taser as I ran past shooting the guard who had been close on my heels.

As I neared the fence I stopped and tripped up a guard he got up kneeling on his hand and knees. I ran at him and used him as a jumping trapilen and we t high I to the sky then using my hand protected my the leather glover I got over and started to run. For once. Full. Speed. I ran for about two miles until a black van stopes in front of me and six men wearing swat clothing got out of the car. They were only rumours in the cells but here they were real they were a tough squad that hunted down partials who had escaped beyond the fence a talk man with a buzz cu grabed me and through me too the floor he started kickin me and the others joined in I begged for them to stop that I would get into the van and go back with them after about ten minute they stopped I felt broken In lots of different places.

"now animals don't get to go in cars they have leaches" The evil man said he was the one with the buzz cut obvious the leader. I felt something go around my neck and looked up to see him attaching it to the van then they drove off dragging me behing.

When I got back I was bleeding and I knew I was gonna be in pain a while. The guard offered to take me from the gate but Buzz cut insisted dragging me along by my 'leech' he draged me right past the gym.

*hope this is okay their kind of like scary guards that are actually well trained and only get sent after ones that escape*

Charlotte

Everyone was talking about John. I winced as I watched him being dragged by the van. I ran outside the gym. I couldn't just stand there and watch.

"Hey you!" A guard shouted. "You're not going anywhere. Try that again and I'll send you straight to your cell." He wrapped his arms across my body, squashing me.

"Get off!" I cried, slashing him across the face with my talons. He screamed and let go. Other guards were rushing to his aid, but I had fully transformed now. I flew off, towards John.

He lay in a small pool of blood. His body bruised and broken. I cried out but it sounded more like an eagle sound. One of the men, the one with a buzz cut looked up. He narrowed his eyes and whispered to his men.

"Look-it. There's another. I think we need to make another example." Although he spoke quietly I heard every word. I was all animal now.

I dove down, clawing his face. He swung his arms wildly, knocking feathers everywhere. They spread out and I smilied. I dove down, and grabbed John in my talons. Thanks to my human side, I was strong enough, but just barely. I worked out everyday, and even in his animal form, he was heavy. I wasn't going to last much longer. I flew into the building, to the one person that I hoped could help. As much as I hated to do this, she was our only help. I needed Jesse.

Wow. I feel lazy.

Red

I stared at Cam.

"I don't share my history." And I left it at that. Bonding with people would make me soft. I could not be soft, it would decrease my animal instincts.

She seemed hurt, but she needed to understand that here, pain and hurt feelings were always around.

I needed to fight something; I had some pent-up anger to get rid of.

I transformed physically into my animal, leaving just enough human in me not to kill.

"Anyone want to fight it out?"

I waited for a challenger.

"Jok, remember, there is water on the other side of the fence as well. So after he jumped, he would have to swim 750 yard, he can't run on water, because no even a cheetah can do that. so maybe inserts that? Sorry, but you can't just ignore the setting, and defy the actually sense there is here.

Camryn:


Well, okay then. I guessed she thought I was some tender little girl. Well, I wasn't about to fight her for being bitter. That's the way things worked. It was a big choice for me to try and open up, but she just wasn't the person to open up to.

I sat down, watching Red look challengingly at each person- partial or not- in the room. Some cowered at her, and I stifled a bit of a laugh as I watched some tiny girl tremble.

As I considered who Red would tear apart in a fight, I realized that if there was a fight, there would be blood. This wouldn't be good. I'd feel horrible if I attacked another partial just for bleeding- and it would mean getting tranquilized. Not exactly my idea of fun.

I curled up into a ball and stuck my nose to my chest, trying to cut off my sense of smell. I knew it wouldn't work, but I had to try.

I heard more people entering the room, but I couldn't spare a look up to see who it was. I had to focus on controlling myself, controlling my urge for blood.

**Oh wow, three pages overnight, I think. Um, could someone bring my character in? And remember he works for the scientists.**

Okay bolt this is how I see were they are so you don't think I'm crazy center edge of the iland their there about ten miles of land down from the and around the rest of it water their a fence keeping the partials in the center and their a guan fence Round the iland In The water. Okay *if not tough and try to work it out yourself*

Jok I'll just go off your post, but have it changed a bit, to make it fit more the setting of the prison

David-Electric eel (apparently more closely related to the koi fish, just read that when I looked up my animal. Hope you guys did, helps to know some of their behavior traits)~~

Drowsily, I woke up. Still I was still in the doctors room, this time though Barrick was strapped to a chair.

"What happened," someone asked, he was standing over Barrik, furious.

"He attacked me, then ran out of here," Barrick said.

"Okay. But you were over-" The questioner began.

"He isn't the first. I over power your guards at least three times a week," I cut in, getting up.

"That's why they are replaced often, to easy to get past, and how come your up so fast?"

"Cause. I get three of these a day, after being here for a year, you build of an immunity, soon these won;t even affect me at all," I said, and then the doors burst open. John was dragged in by two guards, covered in water and blood.

"Sup John," I said and he looked up in pain, "Tried to get out huh. Yeah I got to the water a few times, those surronders suck huh. Always get you when you don;t expect it."

John stayed silent, obviously into much pain to speak.

"You need painkillers I'm guess," And at that word, the guard, who had left when they entered, came back and gave John a dose of something, then dragged him back out.

"So can I go?" I asked.

"Sure," Said the questioner, then featured for me to go. Taking this chance I ran for it. Shocking all the guards as I went. But my intent wasn't to get out. Quickly I grabbed a guard, around my own size. undressed him, slipped into his clothes, and dragged his body away, and hid it outside, in the dumpster.

Then I went back to the gym, right as I heard Red's challenge.

"I'll need you two," I told Red and Cam, and lead them outside.

"What," Spat Cam.

"Well I thought you might want to know your way out," I said and took my sun glasses off. The two smiled.

"Tonight," I said and left them.

Billy wrote:**Oh wow, three pages overnight, I think. Um, could someone bring my character in? And remember he works for the scientists.**

You could technically go in on my last post, because she didn't look up to see who it was. You could come up and talk to Cam if you want.

Edit: That may not work now, considering the plot changes bolt just added in. I'm excited, by the way! Haha.

jok101 wrote:Okay bolt this is how I see were they are so you don't think I'm crazy center edge of the iland their there about ten miles of land down from the and around the rest of it water their a fence keeping the partials in the center and their a guan fence Round the iland In The water. Okay *if not tough and try to work it out yourself*

okay I barley under stood that, but we have a set, setting already.

there is an island 750 yard to the east and west from land. The island is roughly the same distance in length. the whole island is surrounded by the fence.

Also I wrote my post while you wrote that, and I guess I can just fix mine to work yours right.

EDIT: Um music, I kind of already went with yours.

Okay bolt.


Camryn:

"Tonight," David grinned as he walked away.

So he'd finally gotten his act together. I smiled to myself as I walked back in the gym, leaving Red somewhere behind. She'd probably go challenge someone to a fight again.

As I entered the gym, I saw a new face. It was a boy, a partial, who I hadn't met before. He turned to me, eying me suspiciously.

"What were you doing out there?" he asked.

"None of your business," I spat.

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Billy, that's you.

Dr. Julius Barrick

Barrick stormed back into his office. He grabbed a radio from his desk. "What did you think you were doing?!" he shouted into the radio. The head of Recapture Team 1 answered.

"What do you mean, Barrick?"

"What kind of sick game are you playing? You dragged that Partial back here on a leash?"

"He escaped, Barrick."

"He is a valuable piece of research! You dare you compromise my work like that?! I should have you fired! Don't you ever do that again!"

Static hissed from the radio. "Understood, Sir."

"It better be," snapped Barrick. He replaced the radio on its charger and left the room. Barrick paused at the threshold. He pressed the intercom button.

"Get Josh Golfs in Treatment 3. Immediately, please. I want all medical staff in there too."

Barrick marched out of the room quickly. He made a mental note to call a guard's meeting to confront the recent spree of brutality towards the Partials. The Partials were potentially fragile. They were his project, and Barrick would be darned it any simpleton thug would ruin it for him.

Barrick entered the Treatment room. He eyed his staff critically.

"Everybody, we have a major case coming through. Expect a mood swing. Be gentle, we don't know how his injuries have affected him. After treatment, I want a doctor monitoring his conditions at all times. Those idiots in the Recapture Team nearly murdered him."

The medical staff nodded. The door swung open again, and Josh's form was wheeled in.

"All right, everyone..." said Barrick bracingly. "Gloves on and don't be squeamish..."

** I feel like I had to write this post to make a point. Barrick is not bonded with the Partials. But they represent his life's work. In all essence, the Partial Project is Barrick's baby. He will stop at nothing to protect the project, only for the sake of keeping his work alive. If any of the Partials were only regular children, he would care much less. Nonetheless, Barrick is not a brutal man. Anything he does is simply because Barrick has deemed it necessary for the life of the project.

Jesse

The back doors swung open wide, Pisces automatically jumping into the sunlight. This area was a small contained one, specially formated for the scientist, after all it branched off their section where they wouldn't be bothered. Jesse stretched, reaching her arms in the arms and yawned slightly.

Rello was standing beside her, humming lightly, holding the cup of coffee in his hand. He had convinced her to come and get a refill, which of course meant grabbing a couple donuts he could eat on the way. It was quite a surprise to see how much Rello ate, sugar and all, and how thin and skinny he truly was. I have to figure out his work-out regimine. Jesse thought with a smirk.

Pisces came back to Jesse and looked expectantly at her, obviously knowing the blue and green ball in her hand. Jesse tossed it far and Pisces lurched forward speeding towards the ball. She ran right past it, before it fell.

"What do you feel about this whole Partial business?" Jesse asked, trying to create small talk. But she was alarmed when he stiffened and looked down at his feet. His pleasant hum stopped.

"It is definetely important. There is no way else we can go with this. Imagine what the effects would be if this experiment actually works? They already made wonders with the discovery of the brain stem cells. That change the face of brain medical history." Rello spoke almost in a slight trance. "Imagine what we might be able to do just by pulling a couple strands of DNA, and rplacing it with animals. The possiblities are endless. Common diseases might be put to the end, our immune systems would become like gold."

"But the torture and slaughter these people go through--"

"Is absolutely worth it. Imagine the greater outcome. Don't dwell on the past." He interupted her. He took a sip of his coffee, and almost automatically he got a different air to him. "Enough of this matter. Pi is a very lovely dog. Which breeder did you by her from?"

"She was a rescue." Jesse said, still haunted by their tiny discussion. "She was being mis-treated by her original owners. They rescued her, and gave her close to freedom. She became mine and she is the best dog I ever had." Jesse automatically thought to the Partials. The scientists and doctors were mistreting them, just like that other family did to Pi. Pi was taken away. Jesse thought that if the Partials were to be free, maybe then, all their problems would come to an end.

A shrill eagle call came from the inside of the hall and Jesse and Rello turned to look, Pisces coming and standing in between them.

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~Incognito

Sorry if I got him wrong, but from earlier I got the feeling he had a somewhat short temper, and with David as sort liking to get on nerves, I thought he might lash out a bit, but not to far either. Sorry if I got him wrong.

Also next post towards David, when in escape, someone bring up the act together thing and have hi m say something with the basic thought of "Oh I could have gotten out my first few days, but when I failed the first few times...well it was fun, getting out, getting them mad, then giving them some hope, right before doing it again.

Caleb

He didn't understand why some people were so desperate to escape from here. Didn't they realise that they'd probably be treated even worse in the real world? That the only way to harness what their animal side was to be found on this island?

He knew they'd been plotting their escape, these people always were, but of course, he had no hard evidence to go to the scientists with. He supposed he'd just have to make sure they couldn't escape by fighting them.

Caleb allowed himself a smirk, "You realise that you'll never escape. The scientists have thought of everything with us. You should really just do the smart thing and cooperate." He knew he wasn't popular with the others of his kind, they called him a snitch and worse for siding with the scientists. Just how long would it be before this girl took advantage of the fact that they were in the gym, the one place they could fight?

"Then again," he said, apparently thoughtful, "I wouldn't expect a brainless fish to be capable of realising too much..."