Young Writers Society

Charlotte

I sat in the gym. I had collapsed earlier and gotten the heck out of there before anyone saw me. I sat alone, as usual. A girl growled near me. They called her Red. She was asking for a challenge.

"You will fight amongst your own kind, the only ones who can understand this...thing we're going through?" I asked disgusted. "Why don't you just attack a guard?" She growled at me ready to pounce. I strated changing, just in case.

"You're my challlenger?" she asked amused.

"No. I won't fight with you, but I will tell you what an idiot you're being," I said, viciously.

"I noticed from the beganing that you have a loose tounge," Red said. "You may end up regretting that." I continued anyway.

"Here you are, a brave girl, striking fear into the hearts of the ones you think weaker than you. If you want to fight, go ahead, but I won't cower beneath you either. You don't need to do this," I said. I wasn't trying to be mean, but I had had a long day and Red had just pulled my last nerve.

"You don't tell me what I need," she yelled. Then she pounced. I flew into the air, but not before her paw clipped my wing. I soared up to the ceiling trying to ignore the shooting pain in my arm-wing.

** Um, can either Jesse or Rello come help out Barrick? I meant that they would be included under the term 'medical staff'... I mean, if they didn't hear the announcement or something, a guard can come up and tell them they are needed or something. Just - Can one of you come? Please?

*Uh...Red's getting out of hand...A little too harsh...*

Red

The guards threw me back into the cell. Which only got me even angrier.

"Cowards!" I spat in one of their faces.

I transformed my mind and relayed a message to the other Partials.

"We're escaping at one in the morning. Everyone meet in their cell at eleven. We're having a meeting. Pass it on."

I was ready to get out of here. I needed to hear the plan.

I was hours away from the thing I wanted most.

Freedom!

** sorry MJ. haha. I'm incredibly tired and I was just writing crap. The only reason I was still on was because I couldn't fall asleep. Didn't mean to be harsh. I just read over it now I'm just like...'I wrote that?' haha. Anyway, I'll make up for it.

Charlotte

I was sick of this place. We were toys for the humans. We were neither human or animals to them. Even their pets were treated better than us. We were even turning on each other. I needed to talk to Whitney, but I hadn't seen her since she had 'fainted.' God I hoped she was okay.

I slammed my hand into the fall, and excess feathers flew from my arms. If anything happened to her it would be my fault and, I stopped my thought. I needed to calm down before I actually grew attached to the girl. There is no need in trying to make freinds. I only needed one thing. A plan.

First i needed Whitney and her brother on our side. We were going to find a way out of here. I had to find a way out of here. I can't live this way much longer.

[Rello Firan - Scientist]

"What was that?" Jesse muttered, scratching Pi between her ears, "Should we check?"

"It was probably nothing,"

Jesse's eyes turned to Rello and widened a little; were they judging his reaction to the eagle's screach? A wind blew from behind and he loosened his fingers' grip on the cup, biting his lower lip absently.

"I'm sorry," The words felt weird stumbling out from between his lips, "You seem uncomfortable and I'm sure it has to be from me. I-If you don't like me it's understandable,"

Rello stared at his coffee, almost as if talking to it, and swished it around awkwardly. He glanced up to Jesse and crinkled his eyebrows together, "I'm sorry," he muttered again.

"Rello---"

"Jesse, Rello!" A guard called from the doors, "Please meet Dr. Barrick in the medical ward immediately,"

"I suppose we should go," Rello murmured quietly, dropping the cup onto the ground and starting towards the doors, "We can't keep the man waiting,"

John

I woke up on a cell bed again but it was in one of the recovery rooms Docter Barrick was looking down on me.

"not to worry no broken mines a dislocate shoulder and foot but no broken bones we desinged all the partials to have extra strong sinews making it harder for your bones to break" Doc said and Jesse came in with Relloand started dabbing some contaminet water on my cut around neck from the 'leach'. It stung and suddenly I started growling at her and trying to claw at her. The restraints the only thing keeping me down. Doc motiend for me to get a brain scan and then give me some sedatives I felt the pinch of a needle before going drowsy.

I woke up back in my cell all the partails were back in their cells now I knocked on the bar and Danny voice came back.

"for the last time Stanley I don't want to see your magic trickso piss off" Dannys voice said.

"is that anyway to great a friend" I said with a sarcastic tone.

"oh John it's you highyou alright" she said.

"beat up pulled along on a string yeah I'm pretty good " I said again sarcastic.

"stupid question"

"veery stupid Danny" I said turning to full animal form Then I curled up.

"Danny if we um get out of here what are you gonna do with your life I mean" I said truly wondering

*opening for your charecter in the moonlight

Camryn:

"Brainless fish?" I growled. My entire body tensed, ready to transform. I breathed deeply. I was not going to fight over him, of all people.

"Who are you, anyway?" I asked.

"Caleb."

"Well, Caleb, do yourself a favor, and stay out of my way." And with that I walked off.

Just then, a message ran through my mind. "We're escaping at one in the morning. Everyone meet in their cell at eleven. We're having a meeting. Pass it on."

She'd just broadcast it to the whole lot of the partials? Wonderful. Well, if it all goes wrong and someone snitches, it's on her shoulders, not mine.

I made my way out of the gym and returned to my cell, lurking into the peaceful salt water.

Whitney

Doctor Jesse had ran out of the room soon after I showed I was fine, muttering something about Pices and Doctor Rello. I growled and waited for her to come back. I needed to talk to her, I needed her help.

The call for all scientists to meet made me even more impatient. It would take who knows how long before Jesse came back.

I looked to the guard standing just outside the door. "Could you please get a messege to Doctor Jesse that I need her to check me out? I still feel sick." I asked sweetly.

He eyed me warily but then sent another guard out to find Doctor Jesse.

I smiled to myself. Those guards could be good for something after all.

David~~

"Oh no, Oh no," I heard someone shout.

"What," one of the guards said.

"cell 1 is empty, a partial has escaped!" the shouting guard said.


"You mean David? Don't go nuts for him, he tries to escape three times a week, at least," I said, and got some nodes.

"Oh. But shouldn't we go after him?" the shouting guard said again.

"No don't bother, I say good riddance, that kid was on my nerves all the time, and shocking them to. If he come back again, I might just let him out," There was a chorus of laughs from the guards comment.

"Well I'm going to tell a doctor," said the shouting guard and he ran off to find a scientist.

After that the guard separated, and I went to the cells to catch the meeting.

Anyone wanna bring Stanley in?

I'll bring ferret boy in during the escape, if that's okay.

Sure! (And I wouldn't say ferret boy in front of Stanley ... he might not like it...)

Jesse

She slammed into the door and opened it quickly. Doctor Barrick was standing there in the room. The table there had incredible amount of blood there, and bandages lay ascew. Jesse heard Rello suck in a breath behind her taking everything in.

"You are late." Dr. Barrick stated looking at them scrutiatingly. "Everyone else is already here." It then became clear that all the other scientists were in the room, some looking miserable, others seemingly annoyed.

"I am sorry Dr. Barrick." Jesse apologized with her head bent and gazing down on her feet. She would never have acted like this around anyone else, but this here was her Uncle, and the top notch. She stepped into the room, followed by Rello who stood at her side, automatically knowing that that was Partial blood and he looked at it unwillingly.

"Well, to the point. The guards are becoming out of hand." He said looking at the table. "They nearly killed one of the Partials today. The partial barely made it out alive."

"I have a question sir! Why did the guards treat it so badly?" A scientist asked from the corner.

"Well it seems that the cheetah hybrid escaped through the doors today, getting farther than most have ever gotten. He was caught and restrained. The treatment from there was horrid." He seemed to shake his head at that moment. "The importance of this is unbearable. We can't let anything ruin the data including the treatment of the patients!"

"That is true." Rello whispered in her ear, obviously making sure his point before was clear and establsihed with this words. Jesse couldn't help but frown lightly. The treatment of these people had been horrible for forever now. What ever was the difference going to be? What did it take them to realize that the treament was that bad? Nine years?

A knock came on the door, and the door slid open revealing a guard standing there dressed in all black.

"It seems apparent that one of the Partials is feeling sick. It is recommended that an examination is evident. They asked for Miss Berkeley." the guard said, looking at her. It was the guard from before, the one who had mistaken her for a Partial. She couldn't help but smile. But also, as soon as the door was open, Pisces rushed in and ran right to Jesse.

"Go Jesse, and put that dog in your rooms!" Dr. Barrick hissed.

Jesse grabbed Pi's collar before she would decide to go check out the other scientists and pulled her through the door way and shut the door behind her, releasing the collar.

"Lead me away, good chap." Jesse said smiling and looking up at the guard who just frowned and brought her forth to a small cell, Whitney was sitting there, her face obviously looking messed up, purposefully acting. She clutched her stomach. Jesse had to hold back the laugh that was arising. The guards were so dense. "Release her from her cell. I will take her to examination room 2. I believe there is nothing going on there."

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~Incognito

Thanx for trying to bring in Danny Jok, but I'm still a bit confused. Can someone just post real quick, explaining what's happened so far?

Whitney

Jesse finally got to me. She had a guard take me to an examination room and she convinced him that she would be fine alone with me. I was thankful for that.

"So what seems to be the problem." she asked while the guards were still listening.

"I feel sick." I complained.

The guard was soon out the door and down the hallway.

"We need your help." I told her as soon as he was gone.

"Well what could I do?" she asked. She obviously knew what I was talking about.

"We need you to let down the electricity on the fences." I explained. "We need you to help us escape."

She looked a little worried. "I don't know.."

"Please?" I begged.

She looked at me. She seemed to be trying to justify helping us.

"We would only need you to for a few minutes." I told her.

"I would only be able to let down the electricity for a few moments. The first fence, then the second fence. There is no way to let down both for a very long period of time." she explained.

"We could work with that." I said.

She still looked a little unsure.

*****I hope that was okay...the whole thing about the fences. I wasn't sure and I thought maybe it should be more complicated.******